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@freed_and_redeemed

Great job!!!! I really liked it! I sure was nervous for them!

Poor Riker. I am really excited to see Erich show up!! He was a character I really liked from the last book. I’m really happy to see him again. I hope he gets a lot of “screen time”. 😂

I am wondering why Leon and Riker seem to be struggling with the lessons we…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed Love it!!

@freed_and_redeemed

How… Wow. That’s pretty spectacular. I like it

🙂

By the way, I have this goofy habit of adding dialogue onto the end of what the author writes. Erich was in the middle of threatening to clean the place with his gun before I realized the conversation had changed. XD

Which is probably from how happy I was to see someone…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Poor Riker. I hate Franz.

@freed_and_redeemed

Ouch. Leon, you’ve still got a pocket full of broken glass to work out.

Also…how did Erich end up in the US Army?!

(thank you for hitting Franz for me, Leon)

@freed_and_redeemed

*shivers*

OooOoh. That’s tension.

Love it!

@freed_and_redeemed

YAY!!! SCENE!!!

Oh dear. Poor Riker…….. This is a bit of a fix.

@freed_and_redeemed ^^

@keilah-h yea basically! @freed_and_redeemed thank you! ALSO HIII!

@freed_and_redeemed

*Visible anguish*

You just…leave us…with that?!?

Cruelty of an author. Misuse of cliffhangers. Undeniable suspense.

Ahhhhhhhh…

…

Great job! I don’t like any of these guys. Except Riker of course. And Leon, wherever he is right now…

And though I’ve felt sorry for Franz,  he abused a child.

So yeah. Anxiously…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Woah. I’ve not read your books yet…but man, this sounds very interesting! Oh on…Franz…isn’t that the bad guy I asked you about? Poor Riker! From all that I’ve read about him…he’s always facing fear from his past…

@freed_and_redeemed

Wyoh apparently doesn’t like to notify me when you tag me 😑 Anywayyyy Loved the scene! But also feel so bad for Riker!! 😥

@the_lost-journal

Oh cool! Awesome!!

@elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @whalekeeper @loopylin @freed_and_redeemed @anyone else lol

SOOO I just finished writing most of a scene (it’s not finished yet) but I wanted to share it cuz…ya

SOME TRIGGER WARNINGS!

There is some unwanted flirting, nothing too intense, but the guy is not nice and makes Ara very uncomfortable.

And…more November…[Read more]

@hybridlore @keilah-h @freed_and_redeemed @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @loopylin

Here’s another scene! This is one I started in a previous draft and finished just recently. Again no critiques please! Not ready for that lol

November’s foot tapped against the marble flooring. His lips quirked to the side and he cleared his throat, glancing f…

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@rae @jonas @highscribeofaetherium

do you guys remember this RP *cries*

I read through a good chunk of it and I was laughing so hard!!!
Our RP’s always ended in utter chaos lolll

Does anyone remember Compound Fracture 🤣😂😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Also go to this page

@esther-c @freed_and_redeemed @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @ellette-giselle

https://kingdompen.org…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Ooooo… interesting!! 😃 I like it so far!!

@freed_and_redeemed oooh! I like it so far! If you write any more please post it.

@freed_and_redeemed

OOO!!! I like it!!

I’m very interested!!!

@freed_and_redeemed

Mine are desert Arabian type characters.

Gotcha. I’ll see what I can do!

@freed_and_redeemed

Thanks!!

Oh wow! That’s the clothing picture I have for one of my characters.