@freed_and_redeemed
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months ago
AHHHHHH!
*Throws confetti and glitter everywhere*
Congratulations! Two books in two years? That’s so exciting.
Aww, you’re welcome, and I’ve loved getting to “meet” you here in the kingdom. Say hi to Leon and Riker for me.
Btw, my sister and I were playing with a random scene that had several of our character’s reactions…[Read more]
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months ago
CONGRATULATIONS ON BROKEN SHACKLES!!!!!!🥳🥳🥳🥳 And sorry about the braces. Those are miserable.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months ago
Sounds good!
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months ago
HEEEEYYYY That’s AWESOME!! 😃😃Â Like, wow. It seems like you finished Broken Shackles really fast! 💛💛 Congratulations and good job! 😄😄
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months ago
Congratulations Freedom!!! I’m so excited for you, (and so excited for me, because I want to read it!!!!!!! lol)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed THAT’S AMAZING!!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed @smiley @theshadow
Oh yeah I forgot to put the thing introducing the species in the beginning. Ugh. That’s in the same chat as the drawings
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months ago
@smiley @freed_and_redeemed you’re not gonna know the fandom this is for but just know that it’s based off a video game series I don’t really suggest getting into but I enjoyed., and I like turned it into a sci-fi thing so now all the characters are different creatures and there’s space travel and stuff.
@theshadow you’ll probably like this…[Read more]
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Help with a scene in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months ago
Probably should put some tags on this:
@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @freed_and_redeemed @loopylin @calyhuge @linus-smallprint @theducktator @esther-c @grcr @lightoverdarkness6 @idk
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 1 week ago
Ok, two things. I would suggest reading this scene out-loud, because there were a few sentences that felt a little jarring and out of flow with the rest. They just needed a different word arrangement or different punctuation.
The other thing would be a suggestion, and that would be this. When Leon is running toward the…[Read more]
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Smiley replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 1 week ago
@freed_and_redeemed @keilah-h (yes I want to see your fanfic) @anyone else
okay guys I have the first chapter and prologue of my descendants fanfic which takes place after the third movie
honestly since it’s Disney channel if you haven’t seen it you can catch on kind of quick
but Auradon is where all the heroes of Disney movies live with all…[Read more]
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Smiley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 1 week ago
@freed_and_redeemed
okay for half of that all I could think about was Bucky and Steve in the beginning of captain America the first avenger loland then my mind was like
someday Leon and Riker kids will be friends and they’ll be buddies and I was in too happy of place to think about the trauma an abused child like riker would be feeling in t…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic A New Beginning: A Marvel Fanfiction in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 1 week ago
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 1 week ago
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 1 week ago
That snippet reminded me I have a question :] How did Riker kill Leon’s wife? Did he report her to the Nazis, or…? Was it on purpose or an accident?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 1 week ago
Was my heart pounding or what!!!?? man that was so good!!
And harsh. Poor Riker.
Are you all done with that scene, or do you want any editorial comments?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 1 week ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic A New Beginning: A Marvel Fanfiction in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 1 week ago
@freed_and_redeemed I’m glad you’re another person who takes fanfics as seriously as me lol
also that was amazing. Angsty Steve has returned……lol
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Smiley replied to the topic A New Beginning: A Marvel Fanfiction in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 1 week ago
@freed_and_redeemed
For one I love ittttttt
For two
I know the focus was on Steve and Bucky but I just can’t get over the fact that tony called it a waste of time to look after an orphan while Pietro and Wanda were right there!!!!!Let me at him!!!
lol, I did love it though
I’m currently working in a Disney descendants fanfic
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 2 weeks ago
@freed_and_redeemed yeah not a lot of people have fanfics right now. I have a few but I don’t have much time to share “cause I’m too busy working on it XD
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