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Ruth posted an update 2 years, 3 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed I’m giving you my thoughts on your last snippet in an update because I might want to delete this later.
Firstly, when I first met Leon I didn’t like him too much (Riker and Hans always caught my attention more) but he’s growing on me.
Secondly, Leon would still feel the pain of his mother’s death. And I like that you actually…[Read more] -
Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
I have three kinds of favorite characters:
- Deadly tail-kicking characters
- Charries with trauma
- Charries that are both
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
yay, Riker! You’re on the right track at least!
Aww, poor Leon. but seriously let go of your hate, man.
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed
Ooh, I understand. M’kay, so I cannot write a book without a dual POV, lol, I think it’s impossible for me at this point. XD
When I first started writing from a dual POV, I gave each POV a chapter, but as I starting writing better stories, I noticed that I was adding unnecessary stuff to the chapters, just to make them lon…[Read more] -
MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
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FIREQUACKER started the topic Summer Bible Reading in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 3 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @rae @thearcaneaxiom @jonas @beth-torres @esther-c @trailblazer @theshadow @arcticanimals @linus-smallprint @whalekeeper @freed_and_redeemed @keilah-h @savannah_grace2009 @stephie @grcr @ava-blue @loopylin @theloonyone @anyone @the-sheer-amount-of-effort-it-took-to-remember-all-these-tags-is-embarrassing
So this a great…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed YA for sure. Your books are no worse than the warrior cats books in terms of mature content.
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
I think, content wise, they are young adult, even if you could appeal to an older audience as well.
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
I would put it in YA if it was my book as well. I haven’t seen nor has there ever been anything suggested, that I think would make it inappropriate for that age level.
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
I think YA totally works. YA includes more than you might think. In our library, I find stuff in the juvenile section that should be in YA, and stuff in the YA section that I’m little shocked to see, but it def wouldn’t be considered adult fiction.
So yeah, in short, I think your books would be young adult fiction.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
@acancello (GURL U ALIVE?!?!?!) @esther-c @freed_and_redeemed @grcr @anyone-else
I may or may not have done something unexpected.
So you guys remember Jraldath????
Turns out….Lilitu’s dad is Jraldath.
And Jraldath is also Hanna’s father.
So Lilitu and Hanna are half siblings.
And Lilitu is kinda sorta, part Pythonos.
(please don’t hate me…..)
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
I wanted Invisalign, but apparently my mouth isn’t big enough for all of my teeth to even fit in my head, so I’ll probably have to get braces and spacers 😅 I meannn, I had a dentist tell me that the molars that were supposed to come in when I was 12 never came in bc there isn’t enough room in my mouth 🤷🏻♀️
seriously thoug…
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Rikerrrrr!! Yes yes yes yessss ✨
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
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Smiley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Love the scene!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
I LOVE IT
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Smiley replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
It good to be back again
And thanks!! Honestly though I took a marvel break a little while ago and since then it’s been harder to get back into my fanfictions cause while I still love Marvel none of my fanfics are really interesting Mr
I think I’m actually enjoying taking characters from the comics that we haven’t seen yet…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
ohhh haha after all this time I am still tagging you by your old tag…oops
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@rae 💖💖💖
that means a lot to me. It means a lot to know that someone can relate to that aspect of Leon’s life/journey. Leon tends to be a little bit harder to write at times, and sometimes I worry that no one will be able to relate to him the way I’ve seen others relate to Riker
but knowing that Leon’s story can relate to others…that Leon’s…[Read more]