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@loopylin @koshka

Moth

”I suppose it would not harm you to worry a little,” Moth told Ellis. “Not much.”

@quicksilverwyvern

Flashbacks are useful literary devices. They can drop hints of mystery, clues to the story, or explain secrets.

Just have a good idea of how you’re using them in the book before you dive in. I don’t know how many times I’ve started writing something only to realize half-way through that it didn’t fit with the story. So, are…[Read more]

@ellete-giselle

Me neither. =|

@whalekeeper @loopylin

Ari

Fairy land? A strange turn of phrase, as if there was a definite destination, as if world’s didn’t simply overlap. Moons and wind and monstrous slimy creatures came to mind. His lips twitched.

In a placid voice he he addressed the arrow head in his hand.

“I don’t suppose fairies are so particular about who bakes the…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

If someone made him food, he’d invite them in and might try for a hug. ;] Emphasis on might. He doesn’t know if anyone would accept his hugs.

@ellette-giselle

You’re fine! I’ll see if Jasper wants to do something. I think he would stay quiet at this point and let someone else speak if they wish. But maybe I can come up with…[Read more]

@quicksilverwyvern

Ah! What a great question. Here are some thoughts:

What triggered the flash back? Memories usually have a trigger anyway, but because these are grief/trauma memories, those triggers are likely to be abrupt. They’re best if they’re comnected to the plot or character. For instance, I have a character who lost his sister at a…[Read more]

@nightbird2026

Hello hello! I’m so glad you’ve gotten on KP at last!

I’m Ellette! I’m a published author if fantasy, dystopian, and Historical fiction for middle grade, YA, and adults. I am also the owner of a publishing company, a content editor, and an artist/graphic designer.

I LOVE character and book playlists! Do you do reels and/or…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

for sure!

idk who wants to get rid of a draft, but don’t. They are so helpful to look back on and say “oh, I actually like this character or that line” and steal from yourself. Plus, they are a part of your history! ☺️

Moth deserves angel food cake at his door. He specifically requests it. XD

https://pin.it/2nRJYFBDc

@whalekeeper

uh, maybe they can keep talking…. or talk to Wolf.

I am so brain dead.

@whalekeeper @koshka

Ellis

Ellis laughed and lowered his bow. He had nearly forgotten who he was with.  “You don’t want to try my baking. And I have no need to fear you stealing all my left shoes while I’m sleeping or luring me away to fairy land.” His smile faded a little and he blinked a couple times at Moth. “…Do I?”

@nightbird2026

Hi, nice to meet you! I’m Loopy. I have been on kp for almost four years and I like mostly writing fantasy/scifi. I have three (and a half?) wips right now, one of which I plan on making a comic book. I like drawing, music, gummy peach rings, rainy days, and watching cartoons.

Your stories sound really interesting! Don’t worry…[Read more]

@koshka @loopylin

Moth

It seemed best to take note of when Ari grew dark. Once again, he did not care to say much about himself, but some of his short, clipped exclamations did not seem to come from a place of peace. Passion — and something like anguish — shone out of him in short bursts, like sunlight half blocked by a hand.

Moth would und…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @loopylin

Ellis is completely missing the point of Ari’s question. I apologize

No need. Ellis understood the assignment perfectly.

Ari

Ellis’s shot went wide. Ari waiting for him to start knock and draw again, then gently nudged his arm into a better position.

“Look down the shaft at the target. That will help.” He watched as E…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

*uninteligable screaming*

Careful, that’s bad for your throat. XD

@ellette-giselle

I have a London Fog too! Probably going to wear it a ton this winter. Gotta ward off the anemia chills.

@elishavet-pidyon

thanks for being the polite one and giving the RPs.

*Tips hat* No problem. It’s ma job.

@ellette-giselle

Well, based on those rps, Wolf can do something now if he wants to! Or Wilhelm and Jasper can continue interacting. Do you have a preference?

instead of try to scroll through a million RPs. 🤣

Luckily I have that google doc,…[Read more]

@littlemisssunshine

Oh I love your style! I dress 1940-50s all the time and it’s so fun! I have a couple trench coats, a London Fog, and a 40’s dress coat. They are so much fun to wear! Glad to find another person who enjoys the style!