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@ellette-giselle

Ah, I see. How is this?

“An elf lord who employs orcs.” he straightened to face Travenor. They stared at each other for a long moment while the rest of us stood in suspense. Well, not me. I knew.

“For the love of life!” Travenor spun to kick the body again, eyes flashing steel grey. He stepped across to Onnendel. “It was him.”…

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@raxforge

haha!!!

@elishavet-pidyon   @koshka

It’s not so much the words as Onnendel’s reaction. Or the way it was written. If yoy could do this:

 

“Him!” Travenor spun to kick the body again, eyes flashing steel grey. He stepped across to Onnendel. “It was Him.”

Onnendel did not move. He simply gazed at Travenor with his clouded eyes and a gravity that ache…

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@rae

Awesome!!!!

STOP!!!!!!! Have you eaten Breakfast???

lol. No. I don’t do that until closer to 2:00 in the afternoon………………….

@liberty

Yeah……… unless I do it to Werner.

Also, HUSH! Don’t blow my cover!

@koshka

I refer to you two as the twins because you’re the only twins I know and…. idk. It’s easier because not everyone knows your real names, and I’d end up slipping and saying them instead of your KP names, so I just call you the twins.

As for Power,…[Read more]

@trailblazer   @stephie

Yeah, I get what you both are saying. I feel like church should be a place where you gather with your family (brothers and sisters in Christ) and if church is leaving you wanting more….. I don’t know. For some reason that feels wrong to me. Maybe not. Maybe I’m just so used to my church that it’s hard to see things d…[Read more]

@liberty

Erm…….he probably thinks that’s great…..

*Whips around towards door and screams*

Ellette, what have you been saying?!

XD

@savannah_grace2009

AHHH YOU HOPPED ON THE TREND TOOOOO

THIS TREND SLAAAAAAYYYYS ✨

but most of the time they can simply pull moisture from the air and rehydrate.

Mooooost of the time. Except when they’re in the desert. 😁 Or if they get freeze-dried and packaged. (That got dark…)

If a Pitt can’t sing, they can’t control the plants as they do not…

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@elishavet-pidyon

They don’t have blood, but if cut the wound will spill light that in turn heals it.

That’s some cool concept imagery. 😎

So there are “laws unbreakable” like the cost of reason and the concept of ransom blood which are deep in the fabric of the world.

How does the concept of ransom blood work? What are some of the other unbre…[Read more]

@loopylin

Literally everyone loves your concept, so you’ve got originality conquered and in the bag, girl. XD

I love it so much but it loves to frustrate me and taunt me with its vagueness. Maybe you guys could help me make it make sense?

Ideas ideas

– An Ink drawing melts away after a certain time limit

– After the artist draws something, they…[Read more]

@jonas

Thanks for the debriefing! I’ve read up on these concepts before, but it’s been so long since I focused on them, that I felt you were better able to summarize these things.

Of these, I think effects is actually the least important. Access and costs can both be very important, but cost probably a bit more so.

Definitely agree with this. Any…[Read more]

@koshka

It’s even funnier that Power is your brother. When I heard that, my heart nearly stopped. Then I burst into hysterical laughter!!!!!! And his age!! That shocked me even more! I think I’ll have to change a few things in Dale’s Kingdom Pen story because I described Power as a teenage boy!!!! In my mind, he seemed to be 14…or 15…I hope…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

(I’m only gone foe a few days, and suddenly people are changing their usernames and profile pictures all at once. How am I supposed to know who’s who anymore?)

You look at tags. Those never change.

I think I’m partly to blame for this. I changed my name to a silly nickname of mine, then Andrew changed his, and then other peo…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h

Your senses were correct! This is a redemption story.

Small note on the next story, it was originally began for the short story prompt “a story of a scar” but never finished as such for it sparked the entire Baron Chronicles actually being written, and the story behind Baron’s scar has already been revealed so I had to…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Wow, name-changing is becoming a tread.

Tsk, tsk. No self-deprecation allowed on this topic.

Now you sound like Andrew lol

Does Chase have the element of Creatures? After all, he is the ultimate ✨Disney Princess✨!

I have that meme saved somewhere…

Yes, he’s actually the reason that element came to be. He’s also the reason I…[Read more]

@rae wow.

just wow.

Amazing! I love redemption arcs too, and this short story is a good setup!

@stephie lol!

never heard that before. But hey, at least I’m not the only one.

@elishavet-pidyon @koshka

Apparently my feet changed that, which meant my story was changing itself. A terrifying thought indeed.

Dun … dun… DUN!!! XD

Nice segment. Interested to see where it goes next…