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@keilah-h

Pascal clutching his heart is so funny. XD

*Gasp* How dare you not know who Milo is!! He’s from Atlantis: The Lost Empire.

anyone else have that happen to you, where you write a scene, think it was your idea, only to realize it was mostly an accidental reiteration of a scene from your favorite movie or book?

I’ve had fleeting ideas tha…[Read more]

@keilah-h

In an older project, Farr Jule took in his daughter’s friends despite the risk and their troublesome natures. Jule had six brothers, and they all watched over the child protagonists as a large family unit. The family was widespread over a floating town, but was very disciplined. I liked writing Jule because he was always gracious and u…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Haha. I wish.

Oh, so you want a body, do you? I can go dig it up. Maybe. Government probably burned it through.

@ellette-giselle

Yes! Get Jim! Lol.

Just a guess. Can’t remember if we talked about this before, but I distrust characters’ “deaths” unless I get 100% proof that they’re dead because of all the “resurrections” in books, lol.

@hybridlore

Ugh. I want to shake that kid. Or get Jim.Why do my character gotta do dumb things!!! *sob*

Wait what? Huh. I guess. idk, I feel like I made it pretty clear….

Yes!! I love that chapter!!!

@ellette-giselle

Lol, yes, that may be stupid of Jonathan. But it makes a good story.

I kind of feel like 314 (was that the right number) isn’t really dead. We never got much evidence besides the Agent telling us he was. He could have easily run away or something. But we shall see.

Good chapters! Jim taking care of Jonathan was hilarious.

@ellette-giselle @theducktator @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint @keilah-h

It’s Tuesday again! Two new chapters on whichever document you prefer.

@hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @theducktator     @grcr   @whalekeeper

NEXT CHAPTERS!!!

20-21!!!

@elishavet-pidyon

I decided I loved it when Kyler sent Jace flying into the mystery visitor. XD

😂 Yay!

There were several places where either the syntax or word choice made the little reading voice in my head stumble, so I’ll come back and note those,

Great! I will look forward to those. I actually went over the doc and changed some of those t…[Read more]

@liberty

Ok, critiques/comments to come later, but I was able to sit down and read through it for now. I love it! I decided I loved it when Kyler sent Jace flying into the mystery visitor. XD

There were several places where either the syntax or word choice made the little reading voice in my head stumble, so I’ll come back and note those, but…[Read more]

Father figures are so often my favorite character and yet they always end up dead. 😭

@keilah-h

Hmmm…I really like Father Nicolas from a rather dead wip. I’m also writing a dad by the name of Lotan Linder. I like him so much he just avoided dying where he originally was going to die. I haven’t figured out how yet, but the one character who has two loving and living parents gets to keep them. Also Ryla’s grandfather…he’s weird…[Read more]

@rae @theshadow you two are probably the only ones who will find this funny

So I’m currently writing a version of the story I shared with you guys, but from Sniper’s perspective; it’ll start from shortly before he joined the team and continue throughout everything. I decided to include an intro similar to the one Huntress has in her version of…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

😆 I’m excited to hear what you say!

Don’t worry…I sometimes miss things too.

idk who this guy is but he looks a little like my profile picture lollllll

@liberty

Oh, I just saw this and decided to investigate. XD (Now I really wish I checked my notifications more often. Lol) Sorry it took me so long. And I won’t be able to read through it until later today or tomorrow. 😢 Still, so excited!

Liberty’s Rangers story!!

@ellette-giselle

Oh, lol.