freedom

I finished the magazine!!!

Okay, now to get to work.

@linus-smallprint

I’ll try to send something in as soon as I finish formatting my magazine and get it sent out. I’m almost done!!!!!!

@linus-smallprint

That’s a pretty good addition to the scene! I don’t think that deviated from your story’s voice at all.

You’ll see. Then you will understand why other readers are mad at him. It wasn’t pretty.

Hehe, okay.

@linus-smallprint

YESSS!!! That’s it!!!

There we go. that’s all you needed.

@ellette-giselle

Whaley asked the original question. XD

@linus-smallprint

even if it is his fault she was captured in the first place.

How did that happen exactly? Was it more of an ignorant blunder, or?

@linus-smallprint

Thank you. If you weren’t playing the advocate, would you take Ellette’s side?

I simply mean what I described. 👍 I’m not sure how it compares with the rest of your feedback discussions… I have very little context. XD

He he.

My mind reading powers are impeccable.

Thanks for the link by the way! I can’t guarantee I’ll read it…[Read more]

@theducktator

My brother is in Challenge 2, I am the frazzled senior trying to help him learn logic, debate, and Latin. 🙃

@ellette-giselle

Well, to be honest, I don’t know a lot of pree-teens who like to play dress-up and repeat whatever their sister tells them to say.

Good point. XD My siblings are a lot more willing to do stuff, but these are kids between the ages of 8 and 13. They still like to play “wolf fight” and “Indians.”

The funniest thing is, my most r…

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@whalekeeper

Well, to be honest, I don’t know a lot of pree-teens who like to play dress-up and repeat whatever their sister tells them to say.

The funniest thing is, my most reluctant actor is actually perusing film now that he’s an adult!

@ellette-giselle

Sadly, my biggest two never got filmed because that was the year all my guy actors were done dressing up and repeating lines. lol.

They were too cool for school, huh? XD

also yeah, we don’t know anything about Timothy’s home life at the time of the letter, so he might’ve been single (especially considering Paul doesn’t say something like “oh say hi to your family for me” in either letter)

@linus-smallprint

(I’m trying to decern if the verses are saying that the Elder must be a husband and father, or if they are saying that if he is married, he should be married to only one wife and if he is a father, he must manage his household well. I know Paul was not married and did not have children, but he was an apostle and missionary. I d…

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@rae @theshadow

Do you guys want to try joining up with another small group?

Aw, Barnes is trying to be the comforting grandmother to everyone!

*Gasp* How dare you, she isn’t even forty yet! 😂 I get what you mean. Honestly she would be a pretty grumpy grandma. The grandma who complains about kids but gives them cookies all the…[Read more]

@theducktator  @whalekeeper

I don’t know who asked the original question. lol.

I have done several screenwrites. I used to film with my brothers and friends, and we even got one on disk. I still have the stories around her somewhere. Sadly, my biggest two never got filmed because that was the year all my guy actors were done dressing up and…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Oh.

So I’m not the only one who does this.

Nice.

(Nope, you aren’t allowed to ask which ones they are!!)

lol. Just kidding

I don’t know anymore. I think you should leave it a little “darker”, and it’s good to have lose ends at the end of a story if you plan to go on. I just wasn’t feeling it at this point. I mean, like I…[Read more]

@theducktator  @linus-smallprint

I hope Eric gets captured though.

I felt the same way, except that I don’t know and like him enough to really care if he does.

@linus-smallprint

See, these are the same lines I’m thinking along. I think I’m going to just make him older. The only thing that would hurt would be giving Y’all whiplash after I said he was sixteen. lol.

As for the children and wife thing, I know that Timothy wasn’t married at the time, and he was an elder. (Timothy is kind of my Joseph…[Read more]

@raxforge

Check this out.