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@esther-c @keilah-h @koshka

I have more of Matthias (and others!!)

A scene (although there may be more at the beginning of it) and a snippet of the next scene (although there would be a POV scene from the 2nd MC between these two scenes, of course) that I wanted to share!!!

here it is!!!

and I officially love Moishe even more❤️😭💖

“I was v…

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OH, and I still need to decide which fate Matthias ends up choosing (because his father gives him two options)…

although if Matthias chose the second option, I could connect his novel to some of my other novels.

hmmmmmmm

RANT TIME (lol)

@esther-c @koshka @keilah-h

Soooooo, this novel with Matthias has a second MC (Stefan Nolan Nachtnebel) who will likely be a low-rank soldier in the Heer (regular German army; the entire military of Nazi Germany was called the Wehrmacht, which included the Heer, Luftwaffe (Air Force), and Kriegsmarine (Navy) (the …[Read more]

and Moishe/Avrum being brothers…I love it so much XD

@keilah-h @esther-c @koshka

Anyone want a Matthias scene?

(also feat Charna, Moishe, and Avrum, lol)

Matthias followed Charna down the winding halls, his shoes echoing much louder than he once anticipated. The winding halls were dark, and dare he think it, even foreboding.

They seemed to stretch on endlessly, as if they were paths that led the…

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@esther-c @koshka @keilah-h

EEEEEEE

y’all have no idea how HAPPY it makes me that y’all like this new story idea!!! (esp bc Leon and Riker don’t wish to cooperate rn😭 but this idea won’t leave my head, so XD I’m actually currently writing a scene for it)

and y’all haven’t even met Avrum, Moishe (I am loving his personality already,…[Read more]

@esther-c @keilah-h Glad y’all like Matthias!! (I like him already too 😂)

Alright, so, time to share Matthias’ backstory and his story in his novel.

BACKSTORY

Matthias was born in April 1920, to Werner Richter, a German lawyer, and Sabina Becker, an American actress of German descent. The two met in the United States when Werner was there…[Read more]

@esther-c Girl, I feel you completely.

I have felt that way before, and sometimes still do. My first true WIP idea was an American Revolution book. I thought it was going to be my first novel, my first story that would reach the world. Eventually, though, it just started to feel like it was so slow and just…everything wasn’t working out.

I…[Read more]

now to just make the 2nd MC’s character voice unique too🤔 lol XD

@esther-c EEE, yayyyyy, I’m so happy to hear you love him already😃😂

I really got a feel for his personality… thoughtful, quiet, mature. Those are the things that first came to mind.

Yay!! That’s what I really wanted people to notice, so that means a lot that I got that across!

But his voice is definitely different from your other characters, so t…

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@whalekeeper @esther-c (Hmm, he’s probably been playing since he was…mmm 10 probably. His mother taught him how to play, hehe. Although he stopped for several years…so he’s probably played for around…7 years or so?? He stopped after he married Iris, but still remembers how to play. (he even plays it in Freedom’s Fire once <3)) @rae @koshka @e…[Read more]

@loopylin @whalekeeper @rae @koshka @esther-c @elishavet-pidyon @lightoverdarkness6 @anyone-else-idk-lol-XD

Ok, soooooo I’ve been trying to brainstorm for another novel idea of mine that I’ve had for a while and would like to hear some inputs/thoughts

So, thanks to my Mom’s creativity, I finally figured out why Erich, a side character (and…[Read more]

this is the first fanfic I’ve done anything on in weeks XD

I have an idea that started today that’s living rent-free in my head…may never make it onto paper, but I’m just gonna rant about it here bc I want to XD

House of Heroes; led by Duke Nicholas Joseph Furion, a noble who seeks to bring peace to the land: white, blue, and yellow.

Holds the northern part of the land, the largest portion, full of…[Read more]

@rae Hiiiiiiiii!!!

First off, your descriptions are absolutely FABULOUS, girl!! Like, I can see this scene so much <3

and now for your questions…

1. Not at all! I think it’s a good length for a scene!
2. nope, I don’t think so!
3. Yessssss, very much so! I really loved the body language and it really conveyed Nahim’s feelings/emotions/fears…

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@lightoverdarkness6 @elishavet-pidyon @grcr thank y’all so much!! It means a lot to me that y’all would read the scene and offer some thoughts 💖💖💖

@esther-c @whalekeeper @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @rae @joy-calle @keilah-h @anyone-else-idk-lol

Sooooo I’m currently working on a scene for one of my novels…and I need some advice😅

The two MCs of this novel have both been imprisoned by Soviet Forces (this is 1950s East Germany, btw) for being involved in the underground church.

It’s…[Read more]

I am probably looking more for scene ideas @whalekeeper tbh, lol. I’m kinda in the middle, where Leon/Riker are def plunging into the darkest before they finally come to the light, a darkness that will probably last for several chapters (although there WILL be good scenes happening too! <3).

Either way, Riker’s guilt/shame is about to worsen…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Ty for the advice and resources!