Folith-Feolin

@freedomwriter76

I just realized something about your wip! (the one with the boi’s)

You can use some of this if you want, but don’t feel obligated.

In almost all of the writing I have read with the boi’s that relates to abuse, it tends to revolve around emotions of anger (for the oldest, right?) sometimes a sense of abandonment, and physical…[Read more]

Sebastian

Seb shrugged, staring up at a chandelier as they passed. “I haven’t actively looked for an audience since… oh, the last time I sang in the shower. The matter lies in that, whether one appears or not, there is an automatic behavioral pattern set. Even when I am all alone, I must follow a melody. As if I had an invisible audience, if…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @whalekeeper

“And that isn’t just me trying to sound independent. I genuinely only mean to impress, oh… ninety percent of the time.”

Clement smirks. “To impress? So you stay with a group so you can have an audience?”

@mineralizedwritings

Sebastian

Seb caught up, still a few paces behind the others, and raised an eyebrow at Clement. “With all due respect, sir, I never asked to be part of this group. Nor do I need any protection.”

At Clements bemused expression, he added, “And that isn’t just me trying to sound independent. I genuinely only mean to impress,…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Oh ok… I might have some ideas later!

@smiley @freedom

Oh yeah I need to know what the ships are too.

Are Bucky and Yelena just going to be like platonic friends, or are they so brainwashed that they simply see each-other as an ally? Or something else?

@smiley

That was so sad! I noticed I’ve started reading Pietro’s lines in his accent XD It’s kinda fun

@freedomwriter76 @whalekeeper

“Can you believe him? Verbally attacking an innocent, sparkly-eyed child?”

Clement quirks an eyebrow at the odd statement.

who calls themselves sparkly eyed?

“You hardly look innocent.” Clement retorts, but not without a smile. He grins at the sight of Jakob, hardly able to contain his frustration.

“Oh my stars…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76

Ooh that’s okay 😂 Seb is… at this point, 4’5? At maybe fifteen years old.

Sebastian

“Why don’t you just shut it!? I’m getting tired of your… antics.”

Sebastian gasped, and turned to Clement with wide eyes. “Can you believe him? Verbally attacking an innocent, sparkly-eyed child?”

They probably thought…[Read more]

Oh my goodness yes Peter!

@freedomwriter76

I love it! I really like how you changed each of their backstories to fit the au, but at the same time kept them with some of their canon stuff! Also Bucky and Yelena will be such an interesting combo, I can’t wait to see how you write them together!

@freedomwriter76

DUDE!! This is awesome! Who could ever have enough Marvel au’s?

Ok so… I see where this is going. Poor Steve is going to have a really rough time of it 🙁

@freedomwriter76

WELLL WELL WELL

I love dystopian, if it isn’t evident by my main wip, I would love to hear about it!

@whaley

Yeah 🤣 they are cute

@freedomwriter76

Aww poor Riker!

Man, he’s really going through it rn.

@lightoverdarkness6

Thanks girl! That means a lot to me that you like my style! <3

@acancello

Thank you!

@savannah_grace2009

This is the topic I mentioned 😊 I’ve got a blurb, somewhere up there *points above*

@keilah-h

Right, so she introduces something new to the combat table.

@savannah_grace2009

Right, so it’s a combination of things.

Thank you! I have a topic on one of them, and I’ll tag you in a sec.

Which authors do you take inspiration from?

I also find it interesting how our representation of God can vary in our stories. Yours is very direct and literal in its allegories, whereas someone like me takes a…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Oh… Okay, that makes more sense now. Why does everyone hate them? Did they do something or represent something in the past?

I like to write superhero-ish fantasies, with a lot of randomness and humor. Right now, I have two stories in progress. Project Sebastian, and Project Chrysanthemum (which I am probably going to change…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Alright then, Sara 😉 I’m Whaley.

Ah, I actually read your prologue! Now that I’ve read this, too, maybe I have a good idea of your story. I like the name Lilitu. What are Paynes again? Do they have a special power apart from normal humans?