Folith-Feolin

@freedomwriter76 @smiley

These two are written in a style that is way not my usual limited omniscient view, part of the reason they’re now joining this castle. So if the voice jumps around a bit, blame Jay.

Jayson Barans

Long gloomy halls after long muggy stairways. Just a few minutes in this place and the dark ages were making a lot more…[Read more]

@smiley @freedomwriter76

Alright, first quick descriptions.

Jayson Barans

Appearance: 5′ 10″, wavy brown hair, hazel eyes, lightly suntanned caucasian. 17 years of age.

Nationality: Canadian American. {Polish, Native, English, Irish.

Pastimes: cross country running, martial arts, books, viola, parkour, firearms.

Religion: Apostolic…[Read more]

@rae

That’s totally fine! We even have some younger-than-teenage charries in there, like one of my charries, who basically only got in because of his orator and social skills.

If aliens and faeries managed to get in, your charrie will feel normal in comparison XD

@rae

I wouldn’t call it criticizing 😅 To me, it just looks like you really like riding, and you want to talk about how it actually works 🤷‍♀️ Not to speak for Freedom or anything. I think horseriding is a fascinating subject.

@rae

Sure! ❤️

Welcome to the Fantasy School RP! (Considers looking back for my introduction post I wrote a long time ago… gives up… 😂)

Basically, your charrie is now enrolled in Destina Tasin!

Destina has a bunch of classes, which are all temporarily cancelled so the students can get ready for the school dance. The classes are arranged dep…[Read more]

@overcomer

Hi! I’ve had that happen before, especially if I’m editing it, and someone makes a post in the same area of the forum. Basically if someone else makes a post while yours is still in the process of being posted, the KP ghost steals the slower post 😜

I’m sorry I can’t fix anything! I’ll tag @kathleenramm

But she’s not on here a lot…[Read more]

@calyhuge

I like the “double-decker outfit” description 😂 It took me a second to realize what you were talking about.

@loopylin

Aww, poor Ellie…

Sebastian

Sitting atop a tall teenager with the elasticity of a rubber band was hard enough, but hurtling through a busy mall added to the situation by a million.

Seb felt as if his teeth might…[Read more]

@overcomer

Beautiful. The way you used layered meanings of words is making me want to get my violin out and sing. I love the ambiguous speaker who could be just anyone; you, me, a fairy child…it makes my imagination shiver.

I don’t have any real critiques, but as I just ran across this two months after it was posted, I suppose that doesn’t…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @smiley

Ahh, good. *Sigh* At least he doesn’t break your reader’s hearts too much.

Also, and this is random, but I just love the name Yosef. It’s one of those names that just feels perfect.

*Contemplates whether these two would help calm anything.*

*Crickets*

The more I think about this, would y’all mind if I did add…[Read more]

@trailblazer

Yep! It’s a great time waster… XD

@loopylin

Thank you! <3

Lol yeah… I’m taking college chemistry and I’ve never had a in depth chemistry course before. I mean I knew what electrons were…?

@calyhuge

Okay cool!

Well obviously she wants to marry this Dante, not the traditional one 🤪

@loopylin

She’s joking 🤣 But she legit likes him, as do I.

Also I just remembered you’re sick, I’m sorry!! 😥 I know how icky it feels sometimes when you want to write, but your brain is all stuffed up with the germs. Hope you feel better soon! &#x276…[Read more]

@calyhuge

Oh okay, we can just say they ran inside the mall 😉

@loopylin

By the way, my sister said Dante’s name is cute, and she wants to MaRrY HiM 😘🤣🤣

@whalekeeper

Lol he’s embarrassed by your immaturity? 😂😂

XD yes! I listen to the lofigirl synthwave radio 🤩 I used to listen to the normal one too, but I like the synthwave better. But tbh, I can’t listen to it for more than 2 hours a day because it’s a little too much.

I still do not have a phone, and everyone else in the homeschool group does…

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@loopylin @calyhuge

Hugo

“Oh wait, never mind. I see him,” the kid added, and ran off into the crowd – but not before Hugo noticed he had only one large eye, in the middle of his freckled face.

I either need to talk to him or beat him up.

Hugo hesitated, then swerved in the kid’s direction, nearly bonking Seb’s head into a hanging shop si…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Yeah!! Or they also have to open a door, but they can only open it if they each reveal their greatest secret! 😈

@mineralizedwritings

Oh wow XD You’re the oldest? That’s a full house lol

Yep XD Although a lot of strangers assume my little brother is older, because 1. He’s in a wheelchair so it’s hard to tell who’s taller, and 2. He constantly acts embarrassed about how immature I am 😂

I’ve felt stuck for maybe 4 years or so, I’m just constantly not getting t…

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@whalekeeper @freedomwriter76

yeah let’s make up a villain!Or maybe we just throw them into a mind games labyrinth they have to escape together? XD maybe it needs a key but you have to find the bad guy who will give you the key?

@trailblazor

Yeah that makes sense! When I’m by myself, I’m a lot more attentive to safety/my surroundings than when I’m with somebody else, and that takes a lot of mental energy, so yeah the busier the store the more overstimulating would make sense.