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@savannah_grace2009

Lol you’re good XD

I blame all of you for the lack of sleep last night XD

I’m sorry!! I just want to take your writing seriously. My own writing only improves when I have potential critiques on the horizon 😅 I hope this doesn’t discourage you. If I ever post something, you are free to critique it as revenge, lol.

And hey we all get confused over our projects…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Aw now my cheeks hurt from grinning like a cat 😊🤣

Maybe the heat changed me in more ways than one 👀

@loopylin

It’s complicated 🥲 I moved from the Midwest to the South four years ago.
I start talking in a southern accent whenever I’m being playful (I already knew how since I was a huge fan of Mark Twain) or romantic? And I shift without noticing. Like I call my mom “momma” now, and I call my dad “dadder” with a twang. None of the rest of my…[Read more]

@loopylin

I was at camp all last week so yeah, it’s hard writing after social stuff.

Also I’ve been binge watching doctor who so that’s probably what’s filling up the story portion of my brain

Have fun! I’ve only watched the first season of Doctor Who, but I have Doctor Who pajamas. And a Doctor Who shirt. Both of which I got from a neighbor g…[Read more]

@loopylin

😡 Are you trying to test our friendship or somethin?!?

@loopylin

Nope!

@everyone I will get back to this after I finish an over-thought-out expression sketch for one of my characters.

@theducktator

Yep. If you ask for an interviewer (if no one else will, than I will).

Sorry @loopylin and @calyhuge for not continuing; I’m in more of an artistic mood this month and the words are. Not. Flowing.

I know you guys are here so I’ll come back to this soon.

@loopylin

I saw what you wrote and I agree with that too 😛

@theshadow

Thanks for the support XD

@savannah_grace2009

Girlll for a second I was scared you were gonna talk about my story and I was scared XD

Look girl, you stay confident and keep writing, okay? 😊 Once upon a time, each of us probably had a dark phase, and may still be going through it. Maybe your story started that way, but now, you seem…[Read more]

@loopylin

Girl are you psychic or something? Because I couldn’t figure out exactly how I felt about Chase’s sacrifice until you just voiced it. That’s exactly what I was trying to say 😂 I can understand why it’s tempting to write a character getting their way though. It’s basically their element, even though it’s a flaw.

@theducktator @theshadow

Yeah! I agree

Who all is still back at the cabins? Both of my couples stayed behind.

Zyrin and Nazyra, are still inside theirs, but I’ll prob draw them out next time I RP, so they can go with the group to find the inscription

@ellette-giselle

I think the last one is my fave!

Also, I read the blurb that you have and I like it! I usually prefer non-dialogue blurbs myself, but that one is still fine I think, but I would be happy to help regardless! All I’d really need I think is a basic rundown of the plot and what you want your readers to immediately grasp from the…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I like number 7 best I think. The title feels like it is part of the picture.

Jonathan, you reckless, courageous, foolish kid. What did you think you were doing? (I think you’d get a long just fine with Vulkasin to the rest of the world’s danger)

What made it decisive in my head, was Chase actually wanted this to happen. Sure, he would have avoided it in the story, but the Chase in my head told me that this all must happen.

I get that. He did however already sacrifice his mobility so maybe it just feels redundant to me.

It helps to keep some tether on the character’s mind even if you feel…[Read more]

Guys, I am so in love with plotting right now. It can be so fun. Just need to say it somewhere. 😛

@rae

I like the deer-like appearance of the unicorn. It also seems like a fun resolution scene. Family reunion scenes are the best. I can also picture Chase on the cushions well, because I know what it feels like to be an invalid now and then but still participate in family activities.

I feel like the blindness bit was too much? I mean for Chase…[Read more]