Folith-Feolin

@hybridlore

That would be lovely, if you please

@ellette-giselle

Um, yes?!? There is a great lacking of clean distopian fiction, much less christian. These book mat need work, but they’re good, and I definitely want to see them on shelves.

I can use either, but if you want editing, it might be easier for me to use email? Idk. We’ll see. If I did use email, I would probably just be sending my…[Read more]

Boom, finally caught up

@ellette-giselle

You know I’m more than happy to help with these books…*glances nervously around*

*Turns up the radio to drown out any bugs*

I’m with your brothers on this one. It needs published.

You pick how heavy I critique/edit. You’ve seen what I do over email. And I’ll probably stick with email, now that I’ve got a…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I should have been clearer. XD I was talking about this chapter but also recent events in the book. One of the last chapters had this:

“Thisss one, Iver?” he slapped his knee, shaking his head. “You sssay your power comesss from this weakling?”

Iver stared at him. “She isss not as weak as she appearsss.”

Sef blinked hard.

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My beautiful baby and his beautiful snoot

@savannah_grace2009

I like it! I like how you’re beginning to integrate action on Sef’s part. I definitely want to see an explanation for why she is stronger than other people the pythonos use. I’d guess her strength comes from hope, but she doesn’t seem to have any up until this point.

@keilah-h

If you didn’t know, this is the roleplay Jonas started. I personally loved this roleplay idea and it would be nice to continue.

@savannah_grace2009

Is there something you’re struggling with that requires some brainstorming? What was that epic plot idea and why did you like it? I don’t mind helping. I like brainstorm sessions, lol.

No offense, but somebody has already been called unbiblical for believing in old Earth when we haven’t even defined these terms yet. And I don’t think that’s great. I feel like it’s jumping the gun.
Can somebody define ‘young Earth,’ ‘old Earth,’ and ‘biblical’ please? There are different versions of old Earth, and ‘unbiblical’ is being thrown…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Awesome sauce

@hybridlore

You can message me with the link too

Oh wait, I forgot about this! When did/does it start?

@rae

To be fair, the Hebrew might allow for a something similar to fathering a nation when it says ‘this guy fathered this guy.’ Which would then not be dependent on time. I’m curious about this so I’ll have to ask my dad, he’s the Hebrew nerd.

@theducktator

I don’t care too much either way. It’s not important to the Gospel or to proving the Bible.

The Bible implies a young Earth but doesn’t explain it outright. The Earth scientifically looks like it’s old but there are inconsistencies.

Jonas pointed out starlight. God wanted the lights to appear on the fourth day. Could the fourth…[Read more]

@loopylin

Barnes

For a second, Barnes imagined one of the cat monsters swallowing Mel whole. She watched the girl stroll down the path and pass beyond the tree and ferns. When the last fern stopped swaying from being pushed aside, Barnes stepped off the pavilion and followed at a distance.

@rae

Good luck!