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@rochellaine  I know I’m late, but I am here now (for a little while).  🙂

Actually, I have to go. 🙁  Hopefully will be back shortly! @rochellaine

@rochellaine I meant to say characters.

@rochellaine I am working on perfecting my plot line and character for The Crimson Cup.  Are you rescuing Uncle Bill?

@rochellaine Im here!  Are you on still?

@filewriterbase13x That’s a nice start to a story. Here’s my honest critique.

1) I would almost say it’s too detailed. Let me explain: in chapter 1 there’s a lot of backstory and explaining of the MC’s past. To me it kind of bogged down the story. I would suggest telling some of it but saving other parts for later. It would also increase…[Read more]

@filewriterbase13x ooh yeah! I would love actual Rapunzel hair. And I’m gonna leave the character up to you. You can elaborate a TON if you want. I totally wouldn’t mind you adding in anything extra, but I can’t think of anything I would like to add in particular.

@rochellaine  Oh!  So my director adapted the story of Cinderella for the stage (she wrote the script) and she also wrote the songs since it’s a musical.  There were a few changes made to the story like Ella’s dead mother comes back and transforms her dress, instead of a fairy-godmother.  Things like that.  🙂 😉

@rochellaine @sam-kowal @seekjustice

I have another thought on singing.  I was reading in Romans this morning, and I read the part where Paul was talking about not offending other believers.  Do you think that sing “shady” songs, might cause younger, weaker believers to stumble?

@livgiordano I got them.  I cant wait to read them!

@ariel-ashira I just sent it to you! Let me know if you get the email okay.

@ariel-ashira I just sent it to you! Let me know if you get it okay. 🙂

@rochellaine don’t worry you didn’t freak me out… Other things do that… 🙂
Definately praying.

@rochellaine I think my family was watching the announcement in the other room. *nods* I should be able to ask them.
*sighes* Things seem to come in threes though… But hopfully not this time…

@seekjustice
I’m going to bed now.

@rochellaine No I was concentrating. What happened?
@seekjustice I am trying…

@livgiordano That would be great!  My email is imexinart@gmail.com and make sure to let me know who you are in the subject line.

@ariel-ashira Oh really? That was you? Congrats on getting published! And I really enjoyed your poem! XD. I’ve tried memorizing Broken. And I’ve only gotten like the first two lines.

Yup. I beat you too it. 😉

So…I would rather not let the whole world see my work, so could I share it with you through Google Docs via email?

Lol. Yes, @filewrite…[Read more]

😀 I was going to send you a friend request.  You beat me to it! @livgiordano

@livgiordano Yes, please post more!!  It really has helped me.  I memorized it.  I think of it all the time.  And good job getting @filewriterbase13x to join.  She’s been awesome!  Did you read The Light Triumphs?  Its the first I have submitted to KP, but you might enjoy it.