@filewriterbase13x
Active 6 years, 7 months ago- Rank: Loyal Sidekick
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filewriter@base13x posted an update 6 years, 7 months ago
@ariel-ashira, @livgiordano, @ingridrd, @catwing, @supermonkey42, @sam-kowal, @dekreel, @julia-r, @warrenluther04, Hi Guys. Sorry I haven’t been on a lot lately. I have been busy. I just wanted you all to know, I have a new blog!!! Okay so I only have like three posts so far, but I just started it somewhat recently. yes, Liv, I know you already…[Read more]
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filewriter@base13x and Ben Powell are now friends 6 years, 7 months ago
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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
Ok, guys. So, the computer tells me that I posted my next part, but I can not see it. Can you guys see it? Did you get tagged?
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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
Oh, I am sorry @jenwriter17. I have not been on lately, because I have been super busy. I will give you access as soon as I find out how. 😉
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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
@supermonkey42, no you weren’t too critical, I asked for honesty and I got it. Thank you so much for that!
Okay, good thanks for helping me with that. 🙂
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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@skredder, haha. No I don’t know that reference. At least I don’t think so. It does sound familiar, though. Of course, I included you. You asked me too didn’t you? 🙂
@kaya-young, thank you and you’re welcome. Yes, I suppose it does. 🙂
Oh, welcome back @dekreel, oh and she’s gone again. Yes, I would live to add you. I am definitely overstocked…[Read more]
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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
Agh! I mean @skredder.
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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
Oops, @catwing and @skreeder
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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
A Kingdom Pen Adventure: Truly Lost our Minds
By
The File Writer of Base13x (@filewriterbase13x)
Part Four: The Losing of Minds
“How? How could I have lost it? It must have been during or after the storm. The storm. Why did I remember that but not who my neighbors were?
I was walking through a forest that I didn’t remember the name of,…[Read more]
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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@livgiordano, Okay Great! I can’t wait to have you in my KPA. I might in this next part. If not then the next (part 5). Is it ok if you are from a certain fantasy kingdom that a certain you came up with for a certain story? I just think that that would be awesome if you were a TD. do you know what I am talking about?
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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
Yay! @supermonkey42 Thank you for critiquing this for me. It will be super helpful when I write my third draft. Too detailed? I was thinking it was not detailed enough. But I think I know what you mean. The thing is that we jump into the action at like chapter 3. So, I guess I could try to even it out between 2 and three a little more. I think…[Read more]
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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@livgiordano, of course. Aw, thanks. Um, one question. Can you have like actually Rapunzel length hair? Or do you want it to be your true length? Do you want me to write you as yourself, write you as your self with additional quirks, or add something in particular to your character.
@skredder, Haha, don’t worry. I am sure my mind is somewhere. I…[Read more]
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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
@ariel-ashira. I loved her poem too! Thanks for answering those questions. I have noticed that I need a lot more description in my writing. Agh I really need to work on that. It is good to have a second opinion. Thank you!
Yes, @livgiordano does really good poetry. She did an awesome poem for a story we are coauthoring. It was more like a story,…[Read more]
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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
Oh, @ariel-ashira, sorry I didn’t answer your question. It is in the future. I imagine it in the late 2000s or maybe even later, but I don’t really have a set date.
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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
@ariel-ashira, thanks! I don’t want to be a pest, but can you answer any of my questions?
Hmm, what do you think @livgiordano ? Do we know each other? Just kidding, yes we do. Quite well actually. At least I think so. Liv is one of my best friends in the world. She’s pretty awesome. *high fives*
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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
@livgiordano. Aw, that’s nice of you to say. Yeah, I would have tagged you too, but you have already read this part and know like the whole plot already. 😁
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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
Oh, and I guess I put the mock cover on there too. I didn’t mean to do that. Oh well, you guys will probably like that anyways.
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filewriter@base13x started the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
Ok, guys. I really wanted to try this, and I think (hope) I will learn a lot of stuff from this. I hope you guys will help me by honestly critiquing this. What is here is my prologue and almost all of chapter 1. My writing is basically the same all the way through style wise, at least.
What I mostly want to know is:
1) Do I give enough…[Read more]
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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
Bye, @jess-penrose Unfortunately, I also have to go. 🙁 Bye. This was fun and the first time I have ever done it. I bid you both a good night. *waves and bows*
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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@jess-penrose, @skredder. Oh, okay. I get it know. Cool! I just finished Part three. As you probably already know, Skredder. Penrose, If you want to read what I just wrote, it’s on the topic, Truly lost our minds. 🙂
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@filewriterbase13x Cool! I’ll check it out.
So I guess that the forum is still functional even though the site is not active?
No problem, file writer! Your little blog thing is cool!