Fernweh_Grace

@smiley

Hey, Miley, welcome back! Good to see you again (well, not see, I guess, but you know what I mean :p)

@savannah_grace2009

Ok, I read the part, and I think it’s a good introduction to Lilitu. I don’t know if you want critiques, so try I’ll keep it at a minimum.

First of all, I don’t know if you had planned for Lilitu to have any more lasting injuries than some cuts and bruises, but from the level of beating he’s just received, he’s likely to have…[Read more]

@loopylin

MERRY CHRISTMAS!

@savannah_grace2009

Yay, another section! I’ll read it after Christmas, cuz that’s probably when I’ll have time.

@grcr

Wow, nice, that’s really good!

@elishavet-pidyon
Oh, that’s lovely!

@theducktator

XD

I thought this was pretty funny.

– Write about a character who’s lost.

– Write about a character struggling to learn a skill that in no way comes naturally to them.

– “Did I break your nose?”

– Two mortal enemies walk into a bar…

– A character breaks something important and rushes to fix it before anybody notices.

– Write a story about a character running into someone,…[Read more]

@liberty

No, sorry.

@linus-smallprint

Yeah, ofc, use them for whatever you want.

@grcr

😖

@theducktator

That’s good. I’ll keep praying.

(and to anyone I haven’t responded to, I’ve seen and I’m praying for y’all)

Waytaminute O.O

I will throw ten of them at the next person who snowballs me.

I DIDN’T SEE THIS.

I’M GOING TO DIE D:

I’m done with my 650 words!

Maybe I’ll post them later.

But now it is time for REVENGE 😈

@jonas 💨⚪4x

@theducktator 💨⚪4x

@linus-smallprint 💨⚪4x

@grcr 💨⚪2x

@rae 💨⚪2x

@savannah_grace2009 💨⚪2x

@raxforge 💨⚪2x

@esther-c💨⚪2x

*laughs in…

@savannah_grace2009

Since I don’t know where you’re going with this, I can’t really provide a good opinion on whether you should keep it or not. It’s very different from any of your other drafts (which isn’t a bad thing!).

I would just say that if you’re going back to add more details about Andromeda, made sure you don’t get too info-dumpy,…[Read more]