Felicity

@felicity

Wow. I like your set up. You did a very good job of an intro.

I did feel like some things were a little too stated, and perhaps not quite smooth. You did a very good job though. I enjoyed it, and will be hoping for more!

And I should probably read more contemporary fiction. It was a little bit funny on my side to be reading about cell…[Read more]

freedomwriter76 @loopylin @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings @felicity

Okay, heres the beginning of my old story, that I already posted so you won’t be completely lost bc it just plunges right back in XD.

Once apon a time there was a camel. The camel loved to drink some water at the forest and he swam across the ocean so he could get some water…

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@freedomwriter76

I get that!!! 😉

Thats good! Sometimes I feel like I’m so awkward and nobody gets it XDD.

Maybe so. 🙂

Yeah!

Lol, I get that. XDXDXDXD

🙂 XDD

Agreed!!! 😀 It’s just a great story all in all. 😉

Yes!!! I actually have a sweet memory watching the newer one! I was about 6,  at my grandparents house, listening to my dad and grandpa ta…[Read more]

@felicity

Thank you sister! Sending a prayer up for you!!!

You’re so welcome!! Thank you so much!! <3 <3 <3

Yeah I did, just one chapter…but somebody said they wanted more…I forget who…so I’ll probably put some more on here soon.

I found yours!! Yes, please share the second chapter!! It was so cute! I loved the historical vibe–even if you didn’t…[Read more]

@felicity

Yeah! I kinda wanted to do NaNoWriMo but yeah, 50k is a lot. And tbh, that’s a short novel too. I think it’s good to make yourself write sometimes, but other times I think it makes my writing lower quality. Some of my best scenes are the ones I wrote really slowly, trying to get the wording perfect. I don’t think I can write much more…[Read more]

@felicity

Lol yeah, I’m already going pretty fast though lol.

I’ve written 12k words since like november… 10? I’m not sure. I was at 3k on the 13th.

idk if that’s actually fast, goodness time flies I didn’t realize it had been that long since I started the draft.

Just don’t want to get burnout lol. 😃

@mineralizedwritings

hehe… I wanna spoil SOOO BAD. I won’t though. I can’t 😆 I’ll just have to write faster lol

Definitely write faster, LOL. That’s so hard to do! Sometimes it’s just there and it comes out, and other times *cough* now it just seems . . . gone. 😂

@ava-blue @felicity @theloonyone @freedomwriter76

I don’t exactly have a characte…[Read more]

@felicity

Ah sorry Idk how to do that! 🤣

The best recommendation I can come up with is to make a list of the plot holes of your story (I have plenty 😅) and try to see if you can think of one solution for multiple at once. I personally really like doing that, and trying to connect characters the reader would never expect to be together, often…[Read more]

@theloonyone

Ooh, I know the band! But… just cause you told me about it. 😆

I like the song!

Lol

Yeah! It’s a good one.

@felicity

I am really on the edge of my seat now…

hehe… I wanna spoil SOOO BAD. I won’t though. I can’t 😆 I’ll just have to write faster lol

@freedomwriter76 @theloonyone @loopylin @felicity @whalekeeper @arien @starofthenorth @lightoverdarkness6

Idk why I keep on forgetting this! Everytime I upload a chapter of my WIP here, I forget to attach the music that goes with my it!

That’s “start over” by Royal Tailor. I assume some of you guys…[Read more]

Gosh, I forgot to tag you *facepalms* Sorry!

@felicity

glances around nervously to make sure @lightoverdarkness6 and @whoeverelselovesadmiresRiker are not listening*

Wait, *gasp* I just tagged them!

Oh yes, here i come!!

WHAT did you say about RIKER!?!? XDD Just Kidding :).

Yeah, he probably was a good villain! Yes @freedomwriter76, So glad…[Read more]

@felicity

I won’t say I’m speechless because, well, I’m speaking/typing :D, but those last two chapters were

so

so

good.

Thank you!! You all are too nice. 😃

I love Tauren’s flashbacks!! And the hint of the civil war and the real world is so perfect! The last part about Keiryn makes me understand more about him and what he’s going through.…

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@felicity

Haha… nope. You’re not alone 😂

Chapter 5 I think?

@felicity @starofthenorth @arien @theloonyone @loopylin @freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper @anyoneelse!

Random art of Tauren: he is probably like 8 here? idk. I dunno if he still plays guitar 😂

Tauren walks out the door with purpose, having chosen to wear a sweater with his overalls instead of his work…[Read more]

@felicity

Yay! So glad you’re feeling better!

Yeah, it did kinda blow up 😂 And there are definitely some fun (and strange) conversations on here

We were strange children….. (still are)

@felicity

Lol yes, it’s a fun topic. Glad you are feeling better!!

@freedomwriter76 @felicity

Yeah, it’s not terrible, it’s just different than the original .Lol Maybe once i watch it again, i might change my mind. But Johnny Depp just creeps me out with all that makeup XD.

Yes, the ending is good! The message is really good too. 🙂

@theloonyone @loopylin @freedomwriter76@lightoverdarkness6 @folith-feolin @whalekeeper @felicity @anyone @arien @starofthenorth

(Pls read chapter 3 first if you haven’t 😀)

Chapter 4

“Dad I’m going to go hang out with some friends.” Keiryn calls into the living room from the door.

Lesli glances up briefly from her writing, but quickly glanc…[Read more]

@theloonyone @loopylin @freedomwriter76 (why do I try to put a dash in your name like every time?!) @lightoverdarkness6 @folith-feolin (I can finally spell your name without using something for reference 😂)  @whalekeeper @felicity

@anyone @arien @starofthenorth

Hey if yall are interested heres some of my story! If you want to read it I…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings Great topic!

@felicity @freedomwriter76 @starofthenorth @theloonyone

This is all so great you guys! I like the cat ballerinas too. 🙂

So unfortunately, I do not have the first book I started to write . . . I was 7 or 8 and I was getting bored during my sister’s cello lesson so I started writing The Mystery of the Queen’s…[Read more]