@felicity
Active 4 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Esther replied to the topic Opinions Please! in the forum Non-Fiction 2 years, 7 months ago
Um…
Oh man, I wasn’t even thinking of any in particular when I said that, oopsWell, you could think about the things people are struggling with today. Stuff like—what the Bible says about the value of life, racism, what truth is, etc. I guess it depends on what you feel comfortable or informed enough to post about, but also…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Lukas
“Yeah but… it really helps when you finally talk about it…” His mind wandered to the special conversations he had had with Ev before whenever he angry or sad.
Easton
“So what about you? if you don’t dance then what do you do for fun?”
Easton couldn’t help but notice how she had quickly shifted the atte…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Okay, @smiley what do you want to do with this RP? I’m game if you want to keep it going or drop it (or way change it up, merge with someone else’s, ect.).
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@evelyn-collins all righty! See you then I guess!!
(and now you know why I have Tech as my profile pic lol. Like him, I can fill your head with useless info for hours)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
And this condition does stem from genetic mutations, possibly the same ones that cause color blindness. I have a theory that the Bad Batch’s mutations would have either killed them or done nothing but make them weird-looking if the Kaminoans hadn’t tweaked their genes to remove the lethal ones and enhance the ones that would help them. Remember,…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Although I’m really sad to see you go, I know you’re doing the right thing. Can’t wait to see your books on my shelf!! Love ya girl 💖💖💖
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@evelyn-collins Maybe! I’ve never thought of that, but there are studies on some people (the only ones with the trait are female, but a male could probably be introduced through genetic experimentation, which is exactly what happened) who had extra light-sensing cells in their eyes. It’s called tetrachromacy, and it’s though that those with the…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
I’d suggest keep her age and change his. It makes things easier.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
I put wayyyyy too much thought into this lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@evelyn-collins All right!
So, Leo’s arc here–the story we’re trying to tell with her–seems that she doesn’t trust anyone, and is really aloof. Her mom’s hurt her, Varian’s not the nicest either, and she’s heard about how her dad walked out on her. Is there somewhere you’re going with that? Like, she’s going to have to trust Crosshair that…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic I'M BACK BABY!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Ahhh, Cefin! I forgot for a moment who that was, the poor dear.
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Koshka replied to the topic An aggravation over Stained Glass in the forum Poetry Critiques 2 years, 7 months ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @smiley
Jayson
The girl looked almost angry. Frustrated? Uncomfortable. Destressed. I glanced around at the dim hallway and cobwebby stonework. Was she claustrophobic perhaps?
Marek paused mid step as if he’d forgotten something, or forgotten to forget. “So…”He looked at us with a wonky blank smile. “do any of you guys ha…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
ok so wanna hear some more stuff I have ideas for?
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
You do what’s best for you girl!
I’ll be honest it’s really hard for me to hear that, but I understand you gotta do what you gotta do, and I respect you for putting God’s will above your own. I’ll always cherish the time I got to spend getting to know you, reading your fanfics when I was having a rough day, and having somebody…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@freedowmriter76 if u ever come back, will you show us how far your fanfics have got?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@evelyn-collins yeah I can see her being less powerful since she’s second-gen. But still.
Can you tell I’m really enjoying helping you brainstorm?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@freedomwriter76 awww ok! See you….sometime, i guess.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@evelyn-collins yeah I could tell lol
does that mean she’s also got superpowerful eyesight? Like, with training and a decent rifle, she could hit things from as far away as he can? (For reference, the “10 clicks” Hunter mentions when he first introduced Crosshair is ten kilometers, or about six miles. No sniper in our world has ever managed to…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
Trust me, you don’t want me to go into a possible family tree rant.
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