Felicity

@lightoverdarkness6

Sorry I messed up your tag!

@rae

I’m going to pop in and give my tidbit (because that’s so much more fun than homework).

1. Some scenes need to be short, some long, depending on what’s being delt with. This one may be short, but it’s a good length for the subject.

2. No? It just felt like a wrap up description of Mandin/a scene conclusion/transition to whatever was coming…[Read more]

@princesachronicle22 @keilah-h

OK! Here we go!

Everton

The figure who looked most like a man let out a deep laugh. “Attack? I could break every bone in your body without using a weapon, human.” The man—who Ev could now tell had blue skin—lowered the spear he held. Adrian stepped out from the around the corner, shooting Ev a disapproving glare.…[Read more]

@princesachronicle22 @keilah-h

I’m sorry it’s been an eternity since I’ve RPed!! 😭 I’ll try my best to get the next RP written and posted this afternoon. I should have time. (Not that I didn’t have time before… I was just being lazy… XD)

@beth-torres

Ahhhh, I’m backkkk. Sorry it’s been like f o r e v e r 😭 I have no good excuse except procrastination, lol. XDD

Fynn

“Awesome.” Fynn grinned, rubbing his hands together. “Then into the dark we go.” He dramatically turned on his heel and led them out of the classroom. “The hallways are spooky in the dark.” Fynn wasn’t sure why…[Read more]

@lightoverdrkness6

Thank you so much girl! really appreciate the prayer <3

Oh girl, I am so sorry, I know that must be so so hard. I want you to know that I’m praying for you girl. ❤ Something that comforts me when I’m struggling is remembering that these trials are going to end one day. This fallen world that we are in is not our eternity, and…

[Read more]

That’s a lot more code than last time I tried to post a pic….

Aaaaannnnddddd…. Nerp

Test, test…

<img src="Error__ez.queue.addFile('/tardisrocinante/vitals.js', '/tardisrocinante/vitals.js?gcb=0&cb=4', false, ['/parsonsmaize/mulvane.js'], true, false, true, false);var _audins_dom="kingdompen_org",_audins_did=566417;__ez.queue.addDelayFunc("audins.js","__ez.script.add", "//go.ezodn.com/detroitchicago/audins.js?cb=3");<img s…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Rae actually asked this same question a while back, and what she told you is basically what I would’ve said. Koshka’s advice was really good too. So yeah, I basically have nothing else to add. I feel like they covered everything I can think of. 😉

@theducktator

Ooh we did!! We were right in the path of totality. It was amazing!! Definitely unforgettable! I don’t even know how to describe it. Because the lighting kept getting funky, it was a little eerie, until it got as dark as it is right when the sun dips below the horizon. It’s so cool!!

@freed_and_redeemed

My advice as a middle-grade writer and a YA reader:

1. Stick as much as possible to inner turmoil. Instead of focusing on how much the outward character is being damaged, focus on how the inner character is coping/struggling/whatever.

2. Instead of portraying each individual blow/whatever, gloss it all together into a simple…[Read more]

@rae does he use “bullets” as an exclamation? That’s hilarious.

Jaylen

Someone barged in as she tried to figure out what exactly was going on.

“Freeze! Wait…are you a Fettian?! I thought I was the only one around here! Bullets, another Fettian ruining my fun. Well, don’t say I’m breaking any rules at any point in time cuz I’m not despite p…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed I will not be mad at you for torturing a beloved character. I’ll be mad at the ones torturing him, but not at you.

I do the same way too much. Just two days ago, I was listening to video game character death screams extracted from their games and imagining what circumstances in an actual linear story situation would…[Read more]

@theducktator My family had some eclipse glasses left over from the October eclipse (which happened to be on my brother’s birthday lol), so we watched for a bit.

@highscribeofaetherium haha, depending on where you live you won’t have to wait that long. Down in Florida where I’m at, we had one last year also, and seven or eight years ago too.

@mineralizedwritings

Don’t apologize! There’s nothing wrong with not being active at all. I haven’t been active much either, school and drawing are just a little more important lol. But I do like to come on and chat sometimes XD

Thanks girl ☺ Haha yes! Same here 🙂

That’s so awesome! I’m so happy for you girl! : )

Tysm <33

Thanks for asking! &…

[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Oh. My. Goodness. 😭❤️🥺 I love this so much! That first part was extremely suspenseful to read…

Is Leon okay?! And Riker?

*hugs both of them*

@loopylin lol

@loopylin idk, I haven’t been here in a while because my group has long since disappeared.

@rae nice! He looks really science-fiction-y, like something out of Tron, but without the glowing lines and stuff.

also I’m good with fangs, even if they look kinda like a vampire’s. I actually LIKE fangs. Maybe that has something to do with my sharp lower canines.

anyway I’ll RP for Hunter now.

Hunter

She looked straight up at him, her…[Read more]