Felicity

@gwyndalf-the-wise

Congradulations on 21 chapters!

Thanks!

@mineralizedwritings

Yes! I do want critique! 🙂

You are so good at the subtle romance between Ev and Ami, it’s really cute!!

Thx!! I love writing it!

I kinda get what you are trying to portray here, but that could be taken pretty badly by some. My personal opinion is that Ev would have a responsibility to both forgive and protect himself from f…

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@e-m-trepke

Now that I read over my post and just saw what you said, I guess that what I thought doesn’t really make any sense. 😅 But that’s okay. 😁

yes, the worldbuilding was awesome!

@keilah-h
XD Yeah, I end up either finding them and being like “WOAH THAT’S EPIC” or end up with placeholders that stick…*looking at you, Derek*…or end up only knowing what they look like and what their relation is to the characters that are named or their place in the story.

@loopylin

Oh yeah!! That would be fun. Matthew is probably gonna be so freaked out at any of the rooms haha.

@loopylin sure!!!

@gwyndalf-the-wise Yeah, it’s so hard to name characters! I looked for WEEKS before I found the name Jareth, which fit my character quite well. But then I waited a while more before I asked my brother if he liked the name, since it was our joint character. Fortunately he agreed.

I also remember reading about one character who was named after some…[Read more]

@loopylin @theloonyone

Crosshair

“I don’t think the arrogant fool knows any more than we do.” Aurivis huffed. “We will have to find another way out. Come. Let’s leave before anyone else is hurt.”

He turned around to walk away.

Crosshair eyed the man who’d said he was the castle owner. Did he really think he could get away with this?

“Wha…[Read more]

@loopylin
XD
Same, or they get named according to their relation to the character’s I’ve already named. Like  so-&-so’s parents, so-&-so’s obnoxious fruit-selling uncle, etc.
Occasionally, they’ll be given filler normal people names… but then those stick and I’m like “….WHAT HAVE I DONE?”

@theloonyone forgot to tag you, whoops…

@loopylin cool!

@loopylin good, lol.

And Aurivis is a good name, especially if he’s a golden dragon…he is right?

Ooh, I forgot about this!

I drew the five of them as dragons–and finished it the day the first two episodes came out! While the others look like they’re actually flying around, I honestly don’t know what Echo is doing…..My brother said he looks like he looks more like he’s falling.

@loopylin That one about characters…..

I love my characters but they always get a limb chopped off or a couple of teeth missing or an eye slashed out by the end of everything…..

@theloonyone Poor Milo, lol.

I’m just gonna hold off roleplaying until @loopylin gets a turn….?

Actually not. I’ll rank how likely they each are to be killed first.

• I mean, Echo cheated death once already, and he seems like the most likely character to sacrifice himself, because his arc is more or less complete…ish. But I don’t know.
• Neither Tech nor Wrecker has a real reason to die yet.
• I think we’ll see a redemption arc for…

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@e-m-trepke yeahhhhh! Great idea!

@theloonyone

OURS, totally OURS, lol.

Actually, I saw an article saying that at least one of them will likely be dead by the end of the show. I was like “WHAAAA? NO!!!! WHYYYYY?”

Although in the first two episodes Tech seriously came close to getting himself killed. Funny story, when my family was watching the show, I was kinda offering my…[Read more]

@loopylin
I think about it too much every time. This is the reasons very few characters in my story actually have names, and I only have one country name, and the book isn’t titled….

@esther-c

You are so good at the subtle romance between Ev and Ami, it’s really cute!!

If you are just sharing and not wanting critiques, that’s ok feel free to let me know, I just love giving them XD

Sometimes in various scenes with Ev and his Dad, with the whole forgiveness arc, I feel like there isn’t a distinction between forgiveness and…[Read more]