Felicity

@orielle21

OOOOOO EUDORA NO!

I love and am slightly worried where this is going. XD

@freedomwriter76

Sorry for not responding until now!

I really love this. My only couple of suggestions would be:

– Slow down on Erich’s past. It’s not bad to show it, it just seems a bit rushed. We need to get to know who Erich is now to be able to understand how much he’s rejected his past, but also so we understand the conflict he has when…[Read more]

OH and he is 11

AHHHH AND NOW ANOTHER BABY!!!!! Yaaaaaay!

Meet ma boy- (I love him yall…)

Nevan (Puck) Sren Fabel

Nevan is the secondborn of Paxton and Luna, and…well…

Let’s just say he’s feisty…

Full of spunk, Nevan-Er…Puck has a mind of his own most of the time. Looking at him from the outside, most wouldn’t know he was Luna or Paxton’s child.…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 My charries are in the room at least. I won’t be able to RP today but I’ll try tomorrow.

@freedomwriter76 SO FIRST….I reaaaaally wanna introduce these two (ok mainly the second one XD XD but I’m gonna go in order of age for the siblings cuz it’s less confusing doing it that way)

SO PLEASE MEET…

Lila Eiddwen Hope Fabel

Lila is the firstborn of Luna and Paxton! *cue the awwws from the crowd XD*

Despite her parents being y…[Read more]

@sarafina would your charries like to meet Aria? And then she might be with one other Charrie I’m gonna introduce in a minute. I think I’m gonna go ahead and introduce all the main ones but not RP as them….

now…just to let ya know there are quite a few (I feel like Freedom with all her charries XD) tho I do have 8 MCs….

and it is their kid…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 ahh love it! Man get him Ezra!!!

ALSO YALL!!! I am now home from the conference (tho we do have a fundraiser this next week so yea) but anyway it was a lot of fun

@godlyfantasy12

I get that. No worries! You get around to replying whenever you feel like it :).

@freedomwriter76 @esther-c

No worries!! I totally understand. 🙂 I hope y’all have a good week!

@freedomwriter76

Ahh I LOVE it!!! Girl, it’s so good!!

Everyone’s already critiqued, and I don’t have anything to critique, so I’m just here to say Great job! 😀 I can’t wait to read more of it. Oh sweet, precious Riker!!!

And Erich…you better be kind to that sweetheart!!

Just one question: Who is Esther? I thought that she was Eva for a…[Read more]

@felicity

Jonathan… XD

@acancello

Oooh, ok! I’ll have my charries answer number 1.
What would you do if you found a $100 bill?
Ami: …

Ev: …

Finally,

Ev: What’s a dollar bill?

Ami: *shrugs* Maybe it’s a type of currency…

Me: One Aletheian drek is equal to two American dollars.

Ev: Oh, ok. So 100 dollars is 50 dreks! Sweet! After exchang…[Read more]

@felicity

Wow. That was super fun/scary to read! Is there a second book? I mean, there’s got to be more! 🙂

I’m glad you enjoyed it!! There is of course more!! 😀 As of now, it is only existent in my head though… XD When I start writing, I’ll post it!

I really like how you described the aunt and uncle. I could totally picture the cottage.

Yay!! &#x1f97…[Read more]

@not-so-secret-secret-assassian

I am the #1 Wingfeather Saga hater. Anyone who disagrees with me will be mysteriously assassinated within the next couple of days (not on the weekends tho)

*horrified gasp* SAY WHAT NOW?!?!

*clears throat*

I have read your post about WFS when I stalked the forum and I can only  agree on bits of it. The first book…[Read more]

@mineralizewritings @godlyfantasy12 @felicity @gwyndalf-the-wise @lightoverdarkness6

Here are the last three chapters!!! (Sorry it took me so long. I kept forgetting. XD) It’s pretty fast-paced, in my opinion. So don’t mind that. I may fix it in the second draft.

I do not have a chapter of Asher and Ev’s conversation. It may be in the secon…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Yes, it is his first name. And in most situations, no, it is not really acceptable, but Hans allows Erich to do it, whereas he won’t let Riker call him by his first name in almost all circumstances.

I think it being acceptable is more based off of the officer than the exact rules, if you understand what I mean. 😅

Ok, that makes s…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @keilah-h @sarafini @felicity @mineralizedwritings @loopyli @elishavet-pidyon @whalekeeper

Sorry, y’all! I don’t think I can keep up with this RP as well. 🙁 Hope y’all have fun!! 😀

@sarafini I’ll hopefully add some more charries later today so yours can maybe meet them if you like.

also thank u @keilah-h

@freedomwriter76

Gotcha. You’re good! 😉