Felicity

@kyronthearcanin

I’m behind on the reading, just finished chapter 5

So…Dune looks like a cat??? XD I went the entire first four chapters thinking he was a bird. *facepalm*

AAaand now I’ve finished chapter six.

Okay, I love this group. They’re hilarious, this is going to be fun.

I’m tired and so don’t have any suggestions for you, I’m sorry.

@godlyfantasy12

Oh poor November 😭😭 that was so good and sad, I can only imagine the reaction his dad is going to have 😭😥😥

(Pls tell November he’s absolutely lovely and he should ignore anyone who tells him otherwise?)

@godlyfantasy12

XD I get that. But they sound cool!

@godlyfantasy12

Thanks, glad you like them!

Yeah Layson is basically just idk what I’m doing but I love her so we’ll figure it out 😭

@starshiness @esther-c

OK thanks! I have 2 other characters who are her brothers and there names are “Samuel Smith and Scott Smith” I haven’t picked out there middle names yet. Do you think that would make it sound unrealistic?

@gwyndalf-the-wise HEH tbh I’m not entirely sure XD it came while I was writing.

some glass objects used during the Harvest season/festival every year or so. They’ve been passed down tho, so like artifacts.

im thinking it’s kinda like mirrors or glass that kinda refracts that sun, kinda used to celebrate the Light (since that’s a big par…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

AH I love this scene! =D I’d have tripped too Just out of curiosity, what’s a Silvening?

@freedomwriter76 just read ur Rocket interaction scene!! So question, does this take place after like the snap and everything??

if so, I’m just wondering if some of the attitude (besides rocket being rocket obviously) is also him being kinda ya know grieved a bit because of his friends (and son…I mean that’s gotta be hard watching Ryo and S…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @loopylin @esther-c @euodia-vision @kyronthearcanin @whalekeeper @keilah-h @gwyndalf-the-wise @princesachronicle22 @mineralizedwritings

HEYOO!!

so…..I wrote some today…

And…as I was writing…something took a bit of a turn and I was like HEH!!! Ok angst time XD

so, I couldn’t figure out totally what I wanted to do for th…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 well…they do have one (tiny!) source of light.

Paxton

Paxton squeezed his eyes shut, gripping the older man’s shirt like it was a life-preserver. He nuzzled his face tightly against Riker, holding Hope against his chest with his other arm.

It was too dark…

His feet stumbled as the two walked, making Riker grip him tight…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings AWW MAYLEE!!! She’s so cute! Poor baby. Also I luv Layson so much. He’s just got such awkward teen dad vibes

@acancello

Great question!!

But the answer solely depends on you and what you want for your story. I feel like the name Shauna Sarah Smith would stick in my mind if I read your story. It’s easy to remember, and it may be something that defines your character. If you decide to keep it, make sure you don’t use alliteration for any other cha…[Read more]

@starshiness

Thanks for doing that 🙂 Now it looks a lot better!

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @whalekeeper

Fynn

Fynn rubbed the back of his neck. “Ok, ok. I’m sorry.” He looked away and rolled his eyes, making sure the fiery little kid didn’t see.

Both Lukas and the boy glared at him, not satisfied with the apology. Fynn sighed. He crouched down near the white haired boy who was clinging to Lukas,…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

(I’m just making it that Layson is the one your charrie heard groan)

Layson scoops Maylee up into his arms as smoke fills the room.

“In my eyes!” Maylee squeals, rubbing one of her eyes with her hand. Layson looks around, trying to find an exit. He takes off in the opposite direction, more concerned with Maylee getting smoke…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

AH sorry for the extremely late response! this week has been kinda hectic and I didn’t get to read and appreciate what you’ve written till today *sigh*

Ohhhhhh boy XD I love the interactions with Rocket and the rest of the group, they’re hilarious. is this where is ‘self versus the world’ mentality comes from in your…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @esther-c @whalekeeper

anyone on?