Felicity

@freedomwriter76 Oh wow!!

I’m glad Felix is redeemed, even if Hans isn’t.

And yes! Make a family tree! Preferably with pictures of each of the charries.

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12

Hunter

“Uhm…I like to paint more than anything, but…uhm…I normally have to draw something before I paint it. I draw and paint trees a lot though…I like painting.” Reuben said.

Hunter noticed a few apparently-permanent flecks of paint along the boy’s hands. He must really be into it.

They reached the door. Reube…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 WOW……

That was kinda sweet….

I love brother interactions! (Even though I’ve said that before.)

@freedomwriter76 Wait a sec, Hans and Felix are brothers? How did I miss that detail?

Aren’t they your villains?

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12

Crosshair

He hit the ground, hard.

Ow….

Two figures peeked out of the shadows, startled by his sudden arrival.

Wait….He knew them.

“Hello, Paxton.” he said. “And you….Riker, right?”

@esther-c

Ok so idk if this will help, but here’s my two cents.

The wingfeather saga has a super cliche trope of “lost heirs of the throne.” I’m sure some older readers just groaned when they read the end of book one and realized where it was going. However, Podo’s arc was imo very unique. Artham’s arc is extremely well rounded yet different.…[Read more]

@acancello Ooh, I’ll do it!

1. What’s your favorite color? Blue and orange.
2. Favorite animal? Somewhere between dolphins and lizards.
3. Favorite book (Sorry, that’s a hard question 😀 ) It changes all the time….
4. Anything you would like to share like stories, WIPs? Well…..My stories are mostly fanfics. And over half of those aren’t even…

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@felicity LOL!

Why don’t we give every character some brownies?? I know a couple more who’d love that.

@freedomwriter76

Hunter

A boy nearly ran into him. He nearly jumped, but held his composure.

“Uhm…hi. Sorry for running into you…I just really need to get to my Algebra I class…heh…” The other kid looked embarrassed.

“It’s all right.” Hunter told him. “I was going that way too…sorta…. Wanna come with me?”

“Sure.” The other boy nodded.

Th…[Read more]

@whalekeeper I’m game!

We never pointed out what Star wanted to tease everyone about, lol.

And male leads? Didn’t most old dystopias have a male lead?

IDK if female dystopia protagonists is a thing?

The way you’re putting it, all of the problems with dystopias nowadays is they’re all trying to be Hunger Games knockoffs. And I know that had a girl lead.

@esther-c I could care less what a country is based off if it’s fictional.

And I have wayyy too many love triangles and such myself. I don’t see a problem as long as it’s written well.

@loopylin I’m good with that.

Allen can defend himself, quite well I might add. He can handle minor injuries, like nothing that’ll take a really long time to heal. Cuts and scratches/non-lethal blaster shots are fine.

Ok I’m done XD I know that was short, but I like working on it bit by bit. Thanks for the sprint!

@godlyfantasy12

That’s a really good point!

I’ll definitely keep that in mind.

Thanks! 😊

@acancello

Here are some name ideas!

For the mom — Harper, Isabella, Janelle, Evelyn

For the dad — Henry, Lucas, Wyatt, Elijah

@esther-c

Hmm…

Well, while yes Love triangles are a bit cliche, in truth, Everything trope wise can be/is cliche. That’s why it is, in essence, a trope.

It always comes down to How You Write It.

(Trademark That XD)

So honestly I think thats always the thing to remember.

If it is needed for your book, and your characters, then keep it!…[Read more]

Here’s the link to my WIP!

@hyrbidlore

Agh! KP ate my post cuz I put two links in it. 🤦🏻‍♀️

Let’s try this again. XD

Waittt — (wingfeather saga right? I love those!!) Sounds awesome!! ☺️ Could I read it??

(Yep, the Wingfeather Saga!) You can totally read it!! I’d love to get your feedback! Here’s the link to the forum topic: WFS Fanfic

And yess!! Themes are amazing…

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Alright! Finished this first sprint and I wrote 515 words!!!!

I will do another one after a short break!