Felicity

Oh, and since you have the characters and plot figured out (How did I not see that??🤣) Just make sure Its to to elaborate and complicated and you add lots of details and description!

@whalekeeper Ok! But she’ll definitely notice him. She’s small enough to fit on a man’s shoulder, so she shouldn’t frighten him if she comes over, right?

Skyraptor

A small hoofed creature (didn’t catch what Gus was, sorry) came to the stream also.

The sense of fear blasted into Skyraptor’s head like wind. He was afraid, and for good reason. The…[Read more]

Seb stares back. “If your sanity is dead, talk about the weather. Now, please, answer my question.”

Clement furrows his brow, still confused by the baffleing child.

“I’ll answer the question… but not because you told me to.”

“I’m a releasor from the freedom bunker coalition…” He pauses, trying to decern how much to tell. “I’m a bit of a pri…[Read more]

@smiley cool! How does he fly? is it like hovering/walking on the air Minecraft style, is it like Superman type, or does he actually have some kind of wings/specialized gliding area on his body?

@esther-c

How fun! I have written a ton of plays when I lived in a neighborhood with a lot of kids even one about the board game “Clue.” I still write some now to preform when I see them all again, my longest being around 17 pages. I can try to help you out, 🙂 I think some good tips would to have everyone have around equal lines, if they want.…[Read more]

@smiley @mineralizedwritings you’re welcome!

@acancello you’re welcome!!

@freedomwriter76 almost tagging a person as a character has happened to me so many times lol.

oh, and cool, I’d love a scene!

@grcr you mind if Skyraptor meets your charrie? if you don’t want to just say he didn’t notice her.

Skyraptor

Faint thoughts led her down the river. Surely there was life here besides her.

Sentient minds, be they animal, human, or alien, were different than those of mere beasts…. This thought she was tracing was that of a being who could talk…[Read more]

@smiley My dad’s cousin uses it too and says making multiple layers for shading and highlights is a good idea.

@freedomwriter76 ahhh so that’s why Franz hates Riker!!

Poor both of them……

also this is completely random but maybe don’t let Riker mention his deceased brother’s name anywhere around Crosshair.

“Nolan” was the name of one of the Imperial officers who mistreated him severely, so…..

@mineralizedwritings nice!!

@smiley I use Procreate too.

Hello hello!

I have done a small amount of this because I write comics. Because you have narration, dialouge, and action all in the same writing, you can use colors to differentiate them. If you can’t use colors, try something like this.

Narrator: Esther was writing a script, but she didn’t know how to finish it.

{Min enter from left, fanning…[Read more]

@smiley

Yw! I’m glad I could help!

For coloring, starting with a solid color on everything first really helps. If you try to shade and highlight as you work, before you have a base layer color down, it’s a lot harder.

@smiley

Thank you!

Well I’d say that it’s much easier to hide mistakes in digital art than in traditional, so it feels like taking a couple steps backwards. I worked on that one over a couple of days, because digital art in general is more draining and takes longer. I use krita (it’s free!) and one of the best things for me has been using the…[Read more]

@smiley

Dude that one of Wanda with her brother jacket is heartbreakiiiiiing

Ok but it’s really good 🙂

@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdaarkness6 @whalekeeper

I drew Kaine! This one took a really long time lol, the pose was really hard!

@keilah-h

Thanks! 😀