Felicity

@savannah_grace2009

Ok! So I finally have some feedback for your WIP. (Sorry it took so long 😭)

In the first chapter, the biggest thing I noticed was a lot of telling/info-dumping. It’s not wrong to give some background in the first chapter, but the key word is “some.” I felt like there was a lot of information about her father and how he had d…[Read more]

Though Ransom could just be a nickname some people call him…

@whalekeeper

He sounds awesome!!

Some name ideas…

• Axel
• Jett
• Orion
• Zayn
• Roscoe
• Benedict
• Kieran

It’s weird, because it’s less of an “Oh, I’d marry this character if I could” kind of a thing, and more of a just “Wow. He’s awesome.” kind of a thing. I’m strange like that, idk.

@scoutfinch180 thanks for the advice!

Uncanny valley…..yeah, plenty of my drawings have gone there. Since I mostly draw fan art, I can tell when I got a character so wrong it’s not even funny.

and LOL about the marrying Legolas part. Y’know, I’ve never found him hyper-attractive. Like, he’s the kinda guy that I can think “Wow, the female elves…[Read more]

LOL you and your sis being grossed out. That’s funny right there.

TBH I see Nat and Hulk kinda being like Owen and Blue in Jurassic World…..? Like, it’s more like he’s an animal, and she’s the only one who can tame him. It works much better than an relationship scenario.

@mineralizedwritings yeahh, I get that.

But then that brings up the quandary of….well…..you’ll have problems with a lot of Marvel though, since Thor and Loki (also part of the pagan myths) make up such a big part of it…….and in the myths, Loki does some really nasty things…..

I had the same issue when I first started liking Marvel tbh.…[Read more]

@savanah_grace2009

Fynn

Fynn chuckled to cover how awkward his question had become. He fumbled with his bangs for a second, then put his hand back on Liv’s arm. “Well… there was one today…” He cast another glance Callie’s way and sighed. “She was trying to invite Chase to come to the dance and even invited him to come with us. I wasn’t exactl…[Read more]

@walkbyfaith @grcr @beth-torres @anyone-else-on-this-topic

So I haven’t been reading with the same plan y’all are doing, but I have been going through Genesis on my own. I think the thing that’s stood out to me the most is the beautiful balance of God’s justice and mercy. I’ve only made it as far as after the Flood, but still, I can see that God…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Yeah I think It’s too much for me lol, also because I think she is based off of some peagen thing… yeah a little outside my comfort zone. I guess it’s weird to me because it’s not a idea that started in Marvel. Even if they clean it up a bit and make it not as weird, idk the origins and that’s a little shifty to me.

Oh and yeah the…[Read more]

@felicity

Thanks! I’m so glad you think so! I intend for it to be brutal lol, I’m hoping after they get back together there will be a deeper dimension to their relationship though. They were so close as just friends I didn’t think there could be a romance without some confusion XD

@mineralizedwritings oh and yes, Nat and Bruce is fine with me, but I wasn’t aware Nat and Hulk is also a thing (and like you said, it’s weird). I suppose Hulk and Bruce are a package deal though lol.

I don’t mind NatxSteve though.

I’m the kind of person who usually ships wherever the story happens to be going right now, which means I can switch…[Read more]

ooh and that story! So cute, but also……

Also weird thing that happened, my family just watched both Tangled and Cars in the last week lol so it’s funny you mentioned them both

@mineralizedwritings Ragnarok was the first full Marvel movie I ever saw. Which was funny because when I first started liking Marvel I could see no purpose for Norse myths to be in it. So it’s kinda ironic that the first movie I got to see was a Thor one.

Hela’s not super creepy, actually, from what I remember. She does kill a bunch of people,…[Read more]

@scoutfinch180 wow those are really good!!

I’m not at that point in digital art yet….

@rae

Tech

“Title?” he asked, slightly confused. “I have no title to go by….neither do I have a military rank anymore. And as for the name of my galaxy, well, come to think of it I’ve never heard it named before.”

Nor did he recognize any of the languages she was speaking in greeting, besides a single tongue he assumed was that of…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 yes we should!

also, since you were probably reading the previous roleplays (if you can call them that), I assume you’ve been properly introduced to Crosshair and Feather?

AKA probably my favorite ship in my fanfics because they’re effectively opposites, but perfect for each other somehow, and their story is JUST SO…[Read more]

@loopylin nice!!

@whalekeeper Marcel’s pretty cool–I like the way you did the wings!

@smiley wow nice boards!!