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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Oh ok! Yeah, cave or village, whatever works. At this point in the story, Evelyn is sitting inside all the time (Kain insists she doesn’t move a finger unless she wants to and it won’t hurt her 😂) But yeah she has a gash in her arm and I think it’s a bit infected. I say infected because she extremely tired and he helps her with…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@loopylin @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6
Milo
Milo listened as the rest of the group talked about their sisters. He walked beside Cammie in the front, the rest followed behind them. His legs were starting to get sore making it harder to put each foot in front of the other. From beside him, Cammie finally spoke to the group, “Sorry,…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 11 months ago
@folith-foelin
Thanks! I will keep working on it, it’s my only WIP!
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
That sounds great! Good idea!
Not sure how that’ll work with mine, She’s injured and at this point was under Kaine’s pretty constant care. Lol, we’ll figure it out. I’d love to do that though! Whenever you want to start that is good. Let’s give the boys (and cammie) an obstacle so it isn’t immediate though… maybe they have to cross…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 11 months ago
Oh, also feel free to tag me if you ever post a draft! I’d love to read your writing if you want to share it!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 u can RP tomorrow btw
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 @theloonyone @loopylin
Ok sooo… I forgot Kaine sisters name 😫 I never came up for a definitive one and forgot my placeholder lol. I’ll pick something that works. Did some searching, lol were going with Everlyn. THIS IS WHY U WRITE DOWN YOUR NAMES PEOPLE!
Kaine
“Y’all are missing some sisters? I’m missing mine too” Kaine…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 11 months ago
@lightoverdarkness
Aw thanks! 💛 I’ll post some more when it’s done!
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Light replied to the topic Hey y’all! Mind if I get some help? in the forum Characters 3 years, 11 months ago
I don’t believe we’ve met yet. I’m Lightoverdarkness6, a teenage homeschooled girl who loves writing. I love your character Hope, so much!! She’s so sweet. And @freedomwriter76 I’ve been shipping Hope and Rueben as soon as they met. They’re so cute together! That’s cool that your writing a book for your friend! Im doing that too!! Th…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
I’m so sorry!! I’ve been meaning to ask you that. It fits Riker!! Also, how do you find such cute anime pictures? That one you had before of Rueben was really good too! Whenever I find some they’re not as good. I just google them.
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Light replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 11 months ago
@mineralizedwritings
You’re so welcome!! Of course! I can’t wait to read more! 😀😊 -
Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Here’s Matt and Ly (as they so affectionately call each other). Matthew’s hair is different though.

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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Here’s Matt and Ly (as they so affectionately call each other). Matthew’s hair is different though.

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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@loopylin @mineralizedwritings @theloonyone
Oh okay! Lol yea, we should make a group of all the sisters inside the castle!
Matthew
“Yeah. Let’s go,” the boy, Simon said. Then he said, “I haven’t seen your sister, sorry. Carter and I are missing some sisters as well.” My face fell. She was 8 minutes older than me, she was supposed to be taking c…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 11 months ago
Thanks so much! I’m glad you think so! I’ve still got a lot to figure out 😅 but I’m looking forward to it.
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Light replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 11 months ago
That is so good!! Oh my gosh their relationship is so sweet. It’s so sad too!! I love it 🥰.
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@theloonyone @loopy-lin @lightoverdarkness
Lol, we seem to have a thing with missing sisters, Kaine has one too 😂🤣
Kaine
“It’s alright, Carter.” Simon reassures him. “We only woke up here a few moments ago. We’ll look for them”
Kaine follows behind the larger group.
Yeah that girls got a good idea.
We need to reach shelter.[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings started the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 11 months ago
Hello! So okay, I’ve finally started at the beginning of my book instead of jumping around to whatever I feel like reading. I have a bit over 4,000 words. Don’t feel obligated to read nearly the whole thing, just give whatever feedback you want! Anything helps. I might switch the scenes around a bit. The beginning of my book is pretty sad, but I’m…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic So…yeah…a new idea is in my head. 😀 in the forum Biblical Fiction 3 years, 11 months ago
You are so welcome!! Yes, like @godlyfantasy12 said, pray. That’s great!! My mom is like my number one beta reader/advice giver/encourager. Good! I know you’ll do great😊. Yesss girl, I love your books sooo much! All the great elements of a story and it teaches about the Holocaust, among other things. Oh, Yes the Chosen is sooo…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Whoa that was a long one🤦🏻♀️😂. Sorry y’all!
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