Felicity

@mineralizedwritings

Oh thanks! I’m so glad you like Lesli and Tauren!

You’re sooo welcome!! yes! they’re so Good!! 😀

I’m really savoring everything about how living underground is different, because they don’t know anything different….or do they? 🤨

Okay! Ooh mysterious… XD.

Anyways, 😂

It just y’know.. has to do with future thingys 😉…

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@felicity

Oh, I really like this!! I love the set up of their home and family life.

Just wondering, how far into the Russo-Ukranian war is it? From what I understand, is it just beginning?

Yeah, @mineralizedwritings tip about changing up the action words with ing and no ing could help the story flow a little better.

Anyway, I loved it! Can’t…[Read more]

@loopylin

Thanks! 😊 He’s kinda my favorite.

You’re welcome! Yeah, I can tell :).

…but don’t tell Ed and El. I’d like to keep my life XD

Oh yes! ! don’t want to lose a new friend! I won’t tell. XD

@elishavet-pidyon love it!! Agh…the question about the basement 😭 I’m not surprised rollercoaster won out…

im sure it was probably an 80% agreement on that one….

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @wilder-w

Nyx

Nyx huffed, ignoring the questions Winton asked the now pizza filled group. He had no interest in any of these games…

No interest in being…[Read more]

@felicity

I really liked that!

Glad to see another present tense writer! We’re pretty far and few between here on KP. 😀

Something That I do to help with the flow is alternate action words with ing and no ing. For example, this sentence could be said with either way.

“I say, as I step inside.

“I say, stepping inside.

If I use “step”, then I…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

Oh thanks! I’m so glad you like Lesli and Tauren!

I’m really savoring everything about how living underground is different, because they don’t know anything different….or do they? 🤨

Anyways, 😂

It just y’know.. has to do with future thingys 😉

@loopylin

Thank you! Okay, I thought so. I really like Dante’s character! He’s very intriguing. I love his personality!!

@freedomwriter76

OH my gosh!! My heart!! RIKER!! it’s not your fault baby!! Not at all!!!

AND LEON AND ADELHIEDE!!! My goodness! Your sweet charries. LOVE THEM SO MUCH!!

UGH HANS!!!! YOU BETTER WATCH YOURSELF…

Girl!!! You did great on showing their feelings and overall reaction!! I mean, it’s heartbreaking, but you did a great job making my…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

AHHH!!! Thank y’all for all the kind words!!! <333

You’re so welcome, sweet friend!!!! 😀 🙂 <3 <3

And y’all…because of all of y’all’s encouragement, I’ve officially reached 37 pages in my draft of this book.

Thank y’all so much. 😭

Oh my goodness!!! That’s awesome!! You ARE SO WELCOME GIRL!! I’m so glad we were able to help encou…[Read more]

@loopylin

Oh, I’m so sorry!! I’m just rocking the ‘mistaking someones character for another’ thing this month XD, right @mineralizedwritings ? XD.

For some reason, I thought Kad was your character i guess bc he’s in the group with Eddie and Ellie (Those are your charries right?) and Dante and Rueben and others.

You can probably just ignore my…

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@freedomwriter76

YES. The worst thing we could do would be to forget. I agree that it does need written about, and I am certainly still waiting for more. Just…*sigh*

Mwahaha… character conflict.

Ooo! I can’t wait!

@freedomwriter76

…and now we enter the reason I don’t typically study WWII.

@loopylin

Okay! Good ideas! Kad, you mean?

@felicity

TOTALLY!!!!

YES!! XD

Ok I will. 🙂

Hehe…your story is so cute. I love how…

The puppie’s parents were not sweet to them and they died. Heavenly Father killed the parents because they were mean to their children.
That’s so good!!! 😀

Yay!! I just read the 2nd chapter, and it’s so cute!! That’s actually really good for 10-11! I’m gonna g…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @wilder-w

Paxton

“You want some pizza, Pax?” Wolfgang asked, standing to get some food. Paxton nodded meekly. “I’ll get you some if you’d like!” Paxton nodded again, smiling.

“Alright!” Wolfgang followed his brothers to where others were at, grabbing food. Paxton rubbed one arm, waiting as patiently as…[Read more]

Y’all I am so ready to have Corvina and Arthur walk in later 🤣 it’s gonna be hilarious….

@elishavet-pidyon I FEEL THAT!!! It’s k, I totally understand. Lol

@elishavet-pidyon ah Viktor and Reúven protective little things XD @koshka why thank u! @freedomwriter76 u wanna RP as the boys or anyone?

@ava-blue @mineralizedwritings @felicity @freedomwriter76 @arien

Here’s basically my playlist for my WIP, Ruby Fire. (You might notice a fire theme, lol)

“I See Fire” (Peter Hollens)
“Burning” (Ludovico Einaudi)
“The Spheres” (Ola Gjeilo)
“Blackberry Winter I” (Nashville Chamber Orchestra)
“If I Can’t Love Her” (Terence Mann)
“Speechless” (Na…[Read more]