Felicity

@arien @felicity

heh…I tend to use cute a lot…XD

then again I really like cute XD, but I also understand where ur coming from.

im also the girl who agrees with the term Beautiful when it comes to the right boy/young man, because there are some that are just downright beautiful! Good heavens! XD XD

i often use cute when I see a c…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6 *throws sword away* sure! XD

@arien @loshka XD XD XD bruh that happened to ma friends at youth camp (not the chocolate thing lol but the guys asking if they had boyfriends and stuff) and one of them (my best friend) already had a guy at our church she was unofficially dating  (they’re now officially dating) and she was like “eh, no.” XD

But it was great because our church…[Read more]

@koshka

Awesome!!

The candy cane fingerprint!! I wrote it and I was like, “What in the world?!” And then I was like, “Let’s just go with it!”

XD

@mineralizedwritings

Great idea!! I may add in Aloth. He’s the villain from my Refined Duology. He’s absolutely terrible. I don’t quite know his motive yet. 😅 I guess I’ll figure it out once I start writing him into the castle.

@godlyfantasy12

“Maybe we should start over…” the blonde young woman tapped her chin. “So, you’re Amidala, You’re E…[Read more]

@esther-c

That was like a Hallmark movie, only even better! XD

The candy cane fingerprint was probably the funniest thing for me.

@lightoverdarkness6

It’s totally fine, girl!! I don’t think you’re copying, bc there are only so many good names out there! Lol. Their names go really well together!

@mineralizedwritings

Thanks so much for the feedback!! I’m really glad you enjoyed it!!

Yeah… I was a little on the fence about the kissing part, but I went with it anyway bc 1). I didn’t go into detail. 2). It’s supposed to be a bit Hallmark-y, if you know what I mean. 😅

I’m glad it made you laugh. After all, that was the point! 😁 Thanks fo…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Ugh, I messed up your tag again! 😅

@arien

Asher and Iris are so cute too! Maybe I just missed it, but are they friends or siblings?

Oh, they are siblings. Thank you!! I’ve been wondering if I should change their names tho, bc Freedom-writer has an Iris and Esther-c Has an Asher, and I don’t want them to think I copied them… Btw, I love the pictures for Durwin and the twins!…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

*Tip toes in*

That’s happened to me for the past few years of church camp, and I have no idea why! Some random boy I’ve never even seen before walks up to me and asks if I have a boyfriend.

And, uh…I really don’t see why. I’m not the most friendly girl out there ( for instance, my normal resting face is very serious, almost a…[Read more]

@arien

I think I figured it out too! Was it on the spoiler forum?

You got it!!

*rubs hands together*

Oh really, I’m not that excited . . . it’s just cold here. Totally just cold (0 degrees rn)

Really?! Whoa. It’s 48 degrees here, plus a wind chill. But on Christmas here it’s gonna be o degrees!!! It hasn’t been that cold here in 40 years, my mom…[Read more]

@esther-c

Wow That was hilarious! I love it! I really felt the characters, even with it being a short story. And although cheesy, the romance was super cute!!

You could call it, “A Christmas dream”, but that’s a bit generic.

As far as writing goes, there isn’t really much I would change. If this were an actual story, I would say they should get…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Well…You do not have to confirm, nor deny, for I know who you speak of.

Lol, yeah, poor @felicity! I read a lot of the spoiler forum a while back, and I was just like “what?!?!?” when I read..that…about you know who 😂. But seriously, great plot twist tho! It caught me by surprise.

Should we tell her what page it is on the…[Read more]

@koshka

November

November gulped, thinking about Hitchens and the woman he’d been with. If there were others like them in this castle…

Others who…were even worse…

He let out a small sigh, wondering where all of his friends were right now.

Where Ara was right now.

Was she safe? Had she been transported somewhere that would protect her? Wi…[Read more]

@loopylin @lightoverdarkness6

Woah, I just had an idea to make things more interesting. Let’s have resident castle villains! I propose just one or two at the start. So like guards of the castle anyone can use to make drama. if anyone wants them to be characters, make them whatever!

Let’s try to give them at least a motive though, not just mean…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings sounds good!! Also I really want Paxton and Luna to meet Matthew and them sometimes, so maybe when/if the dragons roars they’ll hear it too?

Also…I just realized/remembered that Luna has some trauma relating to Dragons!