Felicity

@kyronthearcanin AHHHH I LOVE THIS!!!!! SO MUCH!!!

@freedomwriter76

Ahh, I have not!!! 😭😮😔 So sorry about that!!! Will/Ev were going to find a frozen dragon or something…right??? 😅

Naw, you’re good. 😊

Sure! Lol XD Whatever you want do. 😁

@godlyfantasy12 @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @princesachronicle22 @thearcaneaxiom @elishavet-pidyon @anyone-else-I-missed

Is there any group for Destry, Fyn…[Read more]

@esther-c If you’re bored writing a story, that doesn’t mean it’s a bad chapter. It might mean you’re getting tired of the project and need to work on another one for a little until you get new ideas! Or, if you think a scene is getting boring or useless for your charries/readers, insert some foreshadowing for what’ll come later.

Like let’s say…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 Doing good! How’s that long fanfic going?

Mine’s at a standstill–but that’s because I’m needing some crucial information that hasn’t been revealed yet.

Hello and welcome, @kyronthearcanin!!

(Somehow I missed it when @thearcaneaxiom tagged me. : )

Anywho…

I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, God-loving, homeschooled, amateur writer!!

My WIP is ya dystopian, but I have tons of ideas for stories in other genres!

Fantasy sounds really awesome!! I tried fantasy a whi…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 That was really cute! I honestly love seeing charries as kids.

Welcome to the Kingdom of Pen, @light-warrior-pen!! (Hey, it rhymed. 😂)

I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, God-loving, homeschooled, amateur writer!!

I love incorporating crime, humor, and romance in my writing. I also love showing Christ in my writing in unique ways, but I need a lot of work in that area!

I would t…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 Ok!

Here are two ideas, mostly based off of the idea that they live in caves. They’re also not as finished as I could’ve made them so that you can add more that befits your story, like their culture and stuff:

1. They’re a lizard-like, reptilian race, but not so much to the point of looking snake-like and evil. They have tails,…

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@freedomwriter76

LOVE IT!!!

The boys as, well… boys, lol, was so adorable to read!!

I love writing my charries as little kids!! 🥰

@thearcaneaxiom

I see what you mean. That’s a really good point.

For my situation specifically, I may have to change the chapter a bit. It is in my second draft and never existed in the first draft. In the first draft, they learn this information over time, but it’s unnatural. In the second draft, they learn a little bit at once, but it see…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Ok, that all makes sense, thanks for explaining!

@kyronthearcanin

Interesting. Your characters are fun, and I like the plot you got going. How does Rina discover her power? Does she maybe heal a solider, or herself? Would you like any critiques?

@kyronthearcanin

Also, what’s with the ranks? How does that work? I feel all shady as the Bumbling Henchman lol

It’s based off of the number of posts you’ve made total. I don’t know the different milestone numbers though XD

@kyronthearcanin

While I am still getting the final touches figured out, it is a mainly verbal language. If you’re wondering which race, it’s the Felisaro (they’re probably the most innovative out of the five). The main idea was that they teach it to all the Felisaro they can at a young age, keeping it as secret as possible, and don’t use it unti…

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@freedomwriter76

DIETRICH 😭😭😭!!! He’s soooo sweet. And Oh My Goodness LEO!!! 10 year old Leo is adorable 😍😍😍❤️❤️❤️

And LITTLE ADOLPHUS AND DIETRICH!!! ❤️❤️❤️

And UGH Annalise sounds like a brat 😅😡.

That sounds like a great Sunday! I love that story and message. We actually didn’t make it to church, heh. We went to bed pretty late Saturday…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

November doing origami?! That’s so cuteeee 🤩🥰😭😭 I do origami so it make me happy he does too 🥰

@keilah-h luv to hear ur ideas!! And yea idk I’ll take any ideas cuz their look isn’t confirmed

@freedomwriter76 so I actually discovered that November used to do origami when he was little! And he occasionally does it but not really due to his father’s verbal abuse…

@lightoverdarkness6 so when Vance gets away with Bren and starts trying to find out about his powers….

Bren’s stubborn streak will come out…

And idk what Vance did to Asher but you mentioned Asher was strong willed…. 😬

@kyronthearcanin

Secret as in, only that race is supposed to know about it, so they can speak in secret if they ever need to, but the secret is found out after a while.

Right, but is it an encrypted version of another language? Because if they’re speaking in private, then there’s no point in having it (unless you do have a reason) and if they…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I like it, it’s always fun writing from the perspective of a child! I’ve only read a little bit of your writing before, so I don’t have full context, but it’s good. I don’t think I really have any criticisms, but the pull back to reality felt kinda sudden to me, but just something like a single line in between the flashback and…[Read more]