Felicity

@freedomwriter76 aww Tony 😭 and Sam 😭

Peter is so cute!!! With the S’mores 😂!! And him just like LALALALA

meanwhile everyone else: AHHHHHHH *chaos intensifies*

@godlyfantasy12

Aw, girl, it’s okay! Thank you for understanding 😊

@esther-c

I like this scene a lot! The action was really good!

I felt the pacing was pretty good, although it would have been nice to have some more descriptions and less statements about what they did.

The soldiers were coming ever closer. Ev ran out of the cave with Ami close on his heels. His eyes frantically searched the forest for a place…

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@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @gwyndalf-the-wise @lightoverdarkness6 @princesachronicle22 @thearcaneaxiom @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h @anyone-else

Could some of y’all read this chapter to see if it’s realistic and paced well. I know it’s only the second draft, but I’d like to get some feedback specifically on this chapter.

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@kyronthearcanin

Sorry for the late response! I don’t have any critique for you today, but great job! =D

@orielle21

Cool! sorry for the late response, I tried to respond to you yesterday but internet didn’t want to work

@freedomwriter76

AH THAT SCENE WITH JOSHUA

XD girl I almost cried again

*round of applause* *glares daggers at Frieda* *kidnaps Joshua and gives his guitar to my sister cause she knows how to fix them*

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

OOOO I like both of your mood boards! =D

@kyronthearcanin

I’ve been thinking about writing an article as well. I don’t know what topic you could do, but I’ve been told that it’s a good idea to do something that you’re passionate about and that you know well.

I asked @kathleenramm about writing an article a little while ago. She should be able to give you some pointers. I know that [Read more]

@awsumfaith

LOL! I love those!! 🤣

@awsumfaith

Lol! Love the tangled one, so true!

@awsumfaith

XD those are hilarious

Also I like your username.

@felicity

What about curiosity? Does that tie in with the desire for a deeper understanding?

Is that not perhaps the definition of a desire for a deeper understanding? Does there still feel like there’s something missing though?

Well ok, not by themselves, but since I’ve eaten them, haven’t I inherently tasted them, even if I didn’t consc…

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@godlyfantasy12

It’s ok! Just wanted to let ya know : D

@kyronthearcanin

Anytime!😅

@kyronthearcanin

Love it! I don’t have any major points or criticisms for this one, though I will ask why your calling it a galaxy and not a solar system?

@godlyfantasy12

Cool!

Yw!!! ❤️

@esther-c yes, and November and Ara, but this is the book where Lyn and Nyx are introduced 😊 and thx!

I’ll probably end up changing the one picture (in the middle of the black and white girl) but keep the other one cuz I don’t care for it much either it was kinda added cuz I had no more pics?)

but yea 😅

@freedomwriter76 thank you!!