Felicity

@grcr ohhh ok.

@grcr awesome. Are they related to each other or just three random characters.

@whalekeeper

Ahhhhh, he’s adorable.

*Melts*

@savannah_grace2009

*Sending hugs*

We’ll be praying for y’all.

Three kids with emotional problems have to shut down the black market for exploding eggs.

Two peasants reconcile a kingdom in civil war by deciding their uncle can drown.

Gracious, but this is beautiful.

@loopylin

*Blink*

The cat. I just… that’s perfection.

@loopylin

Huntress

We arrived at the cave. At first, Sniper and I tried to start a fire, but there was no decent wood around, so we ditched that prospect.

Felicity stayed to the back, rifling through her satchel. She had a gun in there, some ink (weird, was she a writer?), some kind of currency, and a few tickets that said they were for a…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Um, yes?!? There is a great lacking of clean distopian fiction, much less christian. These book mat need work, but they’re good, and I definitely want to see them on shelves.

I can use either, but if you want editing, it might be easier for me to use email? Idk. We’ll see. If I did use email, I would probably just be sending my…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

You know I’m more than happy to help with these books…*glances nervously around*

*Turns up the radio to drown out any bugs*

I’m with your brothers on this one. It needs published.

You pick how heavy I critique/edit. You’ve seen what I do over email. And I’ll probably stick with email, now that I’ve got a…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle lol

I was thinking maybe it’s like an adventure story or a war story and they’re all excited about that. Your other ones from what I can tell are more missionary, persecution, or godly-romance stories, and most boys I know of aren’t super into that, especially the last one. But I don’t know.

What do your brothers love so much about it?

@Ellette-giselle I will at least be there to give spelling and grammar advice. I wouldn’t pass up another great book from you!

@whalekeeper @loopylin @jonas @rae @raxforge yeah! I’d love to join this.

all right, time to answer the questions:

Characters:

~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

I think your protagonists were the best.

~ Were there any character that need to be more engaging? If so, how would be some good ways for me to do that?

I do agree with Hybridlore that since Fox was the…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

That was a short chapter, but pretty good!

@loopylin

Huntress

Felicity awkwardly took Sniper’s handshake before looking around at the maze. “We need to get out of here.”

“You can fly, right?” she addressed Soldier.  “Could you maybe scout out a place we could take shelter for the night?”

He nodded and gave a salute before taking off, his powerful wings causing vortexes to appear in t…[Read more]

@jonas cool! I’d join.

@ellette-giselle that’s perfect, thanks!!

@ellette-giselle ^I second this.