Felicity

@lightoverdarkness6

Thanks for the prayers girl!! <3

Dystopian setting would be awesome… you know I love that lol.

Thank you so much! I’m so glad you think my art style is cute!! I started out drawing people from manga and just softened it a bit, made the eyes and noses bigger… and yeah that was kinda it! I think my art is a little more…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @jonas

Yeah, I didn’t think about it much. I assumed that Ottoline was there simply to scare Marcurious, and to scare her by witnessing his pain. It is a bit of a weird moment though because he assumes that Ottoline was there to torture him, but then we see him just being tortured from her perspective. It’s not that this scene…[Read more]

@Mineralizedwritings

You’re SOOOOO welcome girl!!!! Oh my goodness how could I NOT?!?! They’re A D O R A B L E I was literally about to cry reading that when he told her that she was very pretty he is SOOOO SWEETTT UGH 🥺😭❤🥺😭❤ I just want a Tauren ❤🥺

Awwwwwwwwwwww girl I’m so glad!!! 🥰

@mineralizedwritings

it’s totally fine! In person life is generally more healthy than online life anyways XD

XD Yeah that’s true

Woah… she’s one year now?!

She is 😭😭

She’s so lucky to have such a loving big sis 🥰

Awww thank you girl 🥰

Stripping the whole plot and starting over is a pretty universal experience among writers it seems… XD

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@lightoverdarkness6

TYSM!! I’m so glad you like them! Like seriously, hearing that from you gives me motivation to keep working on my book 🥰

@freedomwriter76

Those are so good!

You wouldn’t perhaps mind… if I used one of your aesthetics as my cover image? 😇

@savannah_grace2009

GIRL…

YOUR WRITING STYLE IS AMAZING I LOVE IT SOOO MUCH!!!!!!! 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

@mineralizedwritings

AAAHHHHH I LOVEEE TAUREN AND LESLI SOO FREAKING MUCHHHHH 😍😍😍😍😍😍

@everyone-else-cuz-im-too-tired-to-comment-on-everything-sorry-yall-lol

I love everyone’s writing SOOOOO MUCH!!! Y’all keep going, you’re doing great…[Read more]

@jonas

Whimsy is definitely one of most intriguing shards. I’m very interested in seeing what he/she is like.

Imagine the vessel is just the most dull character ever😂 That would be some interesting irony!

I’m guessing there is some pattern in the Shards, and whatever it is you could probably display it with that chart. The numbers might not be par…

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@jonas

Interesting. Part of me wants to believe that Whimsy is secretly Hoid, but we already know that’s not the case, although I wouldn’t rule Hoid out as secretly being Adonulsium. Anyway, yeah, a 16-gon, or rather a regular 16-gon I should say, or you can say Hexadecagon, but that system of naming gets redundant really fast, and most just use…[Read more]

@euodia-vision

XD yeah it’s too bad they don’t let you pick the part of the picture you want to use

@loopylin

wow that looks really cool! Reminds me of spiderpunk from ATSV XD

@euodia-vision

Pretty much. (Along with plotting a new WIP for NaNo… 😏)

Good! I’ve been editing directly on the doc, but I think I’m going to print it out and edit it by hand. That might help me see things better.

@kathleenramm

You know what might also be interesting to explore since you’ve talked about your questions and issues with Joseph Smith and my Church as a whole, we can play the reversal game where I talk about my own questions and misunderstandings of Orthodox Christianity (Or whatever sect you subscribe to if any) if your comfortable.…[Read more]

@jonas

Interesting, this makes me think of number theory! Could they also be placed on a 16-gon, instead of a linear line? That way they are all equal. Because it feels odd for there to be a numerical hierarchy, where would such a thing come from? And it isn’t a line of least to greatest, because Odium is one of if not the most powerful Shard…[Read more]

@jonas

Interesting. I actually didn’t know much about this, but I have been pondering on the nature and symmetry of the shards for a while. When I first learned about them, I was honestly a little disappointed, because they seemed random to me. When you have an elemental system, you usually want a theme, and it didn’t look like there was one…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Alright, so I finally got a chance to catch up again.

I actually don’t have too many comments on the latest 3 chapters as far as critiques go other than maybe Neveah’s part. I’m all for her having sudden resolve of vengeance, feeling intense emotions of anger and hatred, but it also felt perhaps a bit too sudden. Right now…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Shes worried about Hugo!💗 😍 🥹 This was such a good scene you wrote!!

@savannah_grace2009

Sure 🙃

@highscribeofaetherium

Thank you for explaining 😅 I’m not a science person, so I don’t have a good grasp on all that stuff. Thanks.

That’s alright, lol! This is very helpful actually, because I need to know how much my readers know, so I can explain things properly, and not annoy them with too much explanation at the same time.

I don’t find her t…

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