@felicity
Active 3 months, 3 weeks ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Esther replied to the topic Guardian Angels, a space story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
I’ve been meaning to read this for a while and I finally got to it!! I only got to read the first chapter, but my brain is too dead to give any valuable feedback right now. Love it so far!!
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
I apologize in advance in the formatting is weird. I’m not sure how this is gonna look once it actually posts. XD
Chapter 1
“This was a stupid idea.” Everton Barlowe stared at the geometric building towering above him.
“I told you,” his best friend Amidala said with a smirk.
“Well, I thought it would work.”
“Ev, when would any of your ide…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Awww, Erichhh! 😭
But he sounds like such a cool POV to write from. 👀
I always love reading your writing. 😊 I feel like writing in present tense in becoming more popular now, at least in ya fiction, and I really enjoy it. I tried it once for a short story and failed miserably. 😂 But I might try it in a…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Hello, good people! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 8 months ago
Ok, so I thought I made an introduction post but now I can’t remember. 😭 And if I did and you replied but I missed it somehow, forgive me. 😂 So I’m just gonna introduce myself now. 😝
I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, homeschooled, fiction-writing, teen girl!!
It’s so nice to have you here!
I am the old…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@everyone ok I have an idea
Let’s say the forest dragon appears, disturbed by all the fighting. What if the stone (it was a stone right?) that they’re looking for is somewhere on its body? Like hanging around its neck, or attacked to one of its spikes, etc. When Snake attacks it (I’m kinda dry on RP ideas right now and don’t have the time…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Ok good 😁
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@esther-c nahh he’s fine lol
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Esther replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Y’all I actually would have totally forgotten about this if I hadn’t seen your posts. 😂
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Lukas
Lukas ignored Fynn’s joking. What did he know? But Lukas couldn’t keep from silently laughing at himself. He was suddenly being so defensive. And he knew why… Because, well… he really did like Livia, a lot. Like… a lot.
He blushed at his own thoughts. Maybe this was just a temporary feeling. Maybe Liv didn’t fe…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@minarlizedwritings It’s a bit sad that she’s kinda left out (whether self-imposed or not) but at the same time, I get where she’s coming from, I don’t like hearing about boys all the stinkin’ time.
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Esther replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
I love it. If that’s what God wants you to do, then go for it! I’m sure people will still love your book nonetheless. No book and perfect, and if I’m being completely honest here… sometimes hooks are overrated…. 👀😂
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @smiley @hybridlore @loopylin @whalekeeper
Ok this is kinda long, if it looks familiar it’s a complete redo of a scene I posted awhile ago 🙂
I’m at exactly 24k now… progress is slow but going alright.
For those of you who don’t know, Aleshia is Lesli’s new boss but also the mother of her best friend, Tauren, so she grew up…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
I’ll show you if I ever finish it lol!
Wow, 35 pages? You go girl!!
Also, love the scene. Erich is really interesting…
Btw I’m not getting notifs for anything you tag me in 🙄 if there’s something you want me to see and you think I missed it feel free to let me know in a update!
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Oh thank you soooo much 😭😭 I’m so glad it’s not the ross I like
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@everyone i’m back. Hopefully the ghost doesn’t eat my posts.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@loopylin lol!!
yeah they’re pretty violent at times. I like most of them, but a few are a little dark. Mostly I jut write fanfic based off it.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 8 months ago
@loopylin yeah it is…
The funny thing is that the “near-perfect” hands are drawn on a character obsessed with perfection in to the story….I have a feeling he’d approve of his likeness there because of it.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@rae Nahim has a metal arm? Cool!!
(IDK why but I think charries with mechanical parts are really cool)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 8 months ago
@loopylin nice!!!
You wanna know something weird? The drawing I consider having the best hands I’ve ever drawn was from a Tron Legacy/warrior cats fan art I did three years ago. He’s not my best piece of work, but I’m still really proud of his hands three years later.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@loopylin lol yep that makes sense
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