@felicity
Active 3 months, 2 weeks ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fairytale AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium yikes!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@theducktator THE FIRST AND LAST ONES LOL
ok, but with a name like “Mcquackles,” are they ducks? Or duck farmers? That’s awesome.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fairytale AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@rae I love how you’ve just decided Mayfly will be her name for the rest of the RP lol
also what the toothpicks is a skinwalker and why is it terrifying????
Jaylen
“Of course you’re a dragon! I’m not stupid, despite popular opinion. And no, no other dragons-” The small creature looked around. “Well, minus the one outside. He doesn’t a…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
(and I was over here excited, like: HEYYY, RIKER PLAYS VIOLIN!! XD)
He doesss?? Me too!! XD How long has he played?
(Dude, it sounds like I’m talking about a real person. XD Actually, I was giving an analogy in youth group the other day and I noticed that I started talking about characters like they were real people. I had t…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
I know right??!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 4 months ago
@loopylin lol!!!!
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Sorry I messed up your tag!
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
I’m going to pop in and give my tidbit (because that’s so much more fun than homework).
1. Some scenes need to be short, some long, depending on what’s being delt with. This one may be short, but it’s a good length for the subject.
2. No? It just felt like a wrap up description of Mandin/a scene conclusion/transition to whatever was coming…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@princesachronicle22 @keilah-h
OK! Here we go!
Everton
The figure who looked most like a man let out a deep laugh. “Attack? I could break every bone in your body without using a weapon, human.” The man—who Ev could now tell had blue skin—lowered the spear he held. Adrian stepped out from the around the corner, shooting Ev a disapproving glare.…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@princesachronicle22 @keilah-h
I’m sorry it’s been an eternity since I’ve RPed!! 😭 I’ll try my best to get the next RP written and posted this afternoon. I should have time. (Not that I didn’t have time before… I was just being lazy… XD)
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Ahhhh, I’m backkkk. Sorry it’s been like f o r e v e r 😭 I have no good excuse except procrastination, lol. XDD
Fynn
“Awesome.” Fynn grinned, rubbing his hands together. “Then into the dark we go.” He dramatically turned on his heel and led them out of the classroom. “The hallways are spooky in the dark.” Fynn wasn’t sure why…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@lightoverdrkness6
Thank you so much girl! really appreciate the prayer <3
Oh girl, I am so sorry, I know that must be so so hard. I want you to know that I’m praying for you girl. ❤ Something that comforts me when I’m struggling is remembering that these trials are going to end one day. This fallen world that we are in is not our eternity, and…
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Esther replied to the topic KP Glitch Problems in the forum Questions and Support 2 years, 5 months ago
That’s a lot more code than last time I tried to post a pic….
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Esther replied to the topic KP Glitch Problems in the forum Questions and Support 2 years, 5 months ago
Aaaaannnnddddd…. Nerp
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Esther replied to the topic KP Glitch Problems in the forum Questions and Support 2 years, 5 months ago
Test, test…
<img src="Error__ez.queue.addFile('/tardisrocinante/vitals.js', '/tardisrocinante/vitals.js?gcb=0&cb=4', false, ['/parsonsmaize/mulvane.js'], true, false, true, false);var _audins_dom="kingdompen_org",_audins_did=566417;__ez.queue.addDelayFunc("audins.js","__ez.script.add", "//go.ezodn.com/detroitchicago/audins.js?cb=3");<img s…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Rae actually asked this same question a while back, and what she told you is basically what I would’ve said. Koshka’s advice was really good too. So yeah, I basically have nothing else to add. I feel like they covered everything I can think of. 😉
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Ooh we did!! We were right in the path of totality. It was amazing!! Definitely unforgettable! I don’t even know how to describe it. Because the lighting kept getting funky, it was a little eerie, until it got as dark as it is right when the sun dips below the horizon. It’s so cool!!
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
My advice as a middle-grade writer and a YA reader:
1. Stick as much as possible to inner turmoil. Instead of focusing on how much the outward character is being damaged, focus on how the inner character is coping/struggling/whatever.
2. Instead of portraying each individual blow/whatever, gloss it all together into a simple…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fairytale AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@rae does he use “bullets” as an exclamation? That’s hilarious.
Jaylen
Someone barged in as she tried to figure out what exactly was going on.
“Freeze! Wait…are you a Fettian?! I thought I was the only one around here! Bullets, another Fettian ruining my fun. Well, don’t say I’m breaking any rules at any point in time cuz I’m not despite p…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed I will not be mad at you for torturing a beloved character. I’ll be mad at the ones torturing him, but not at you.
I do the same way too much. Just two days ago, I was listening to video game character death screams extracted from their games and imagining what circumstances in an actual linear story situation would…[Read more]
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