@felicity
Active 2 months, 2 weeks ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Yussss, it’s working againnnn
Wyoh was being mean to me. : (
How many siblings do you have? I have five, and this is quite accurate. XD
I only have three, but I’ve been around big families and have been in houses with lots of children running around. XD I’m glad I’ve succeeded 😂
Ours is named Fluffy the Beast. XD
No way, that’s…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Bruh…
Ok we’re gonna try this again.
@theducktator @savannah_grace2009 @keilah-h @theshadow @grcr @smiley
Chapter 4
“I haven’t seen Antonio all day… He must not be a sophomore.” Hallie stood on her tiptoes, peering over the heads of the students who roamed the cafeteria.
“You trippin’? I thought you didn’t care that much.” Jennifer pl…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Is this workingggg
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Leo
Level 0. This place had a funny floor plan. He punched the button and leaned back against the wall as the elevator began its decent.
Rory was giving him a weird, confused look. What had he said? Done? Leo lifted an eyebrow. “Yes? What is it?”
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Oops. Poor Eddie. At least this kid does actually like to dance.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Sprite kid don’t get it. XD
Sypher
He followed the lasses in, settling into the seat be across from them.
“Eddie. Ellie. Ah.” He blinked at her in concentration. Grinned. “I am named Sypher, but everyone who doesn’t call me that, calls me Syph. As for dancing, or rather…I don’t believe I understand. What days are open”
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Leo
He grinned. “First off you’re going to sit on that couch in the basement break room and sort a bucket of bolts and screws that I accidentally dumped together last week. Or maybe that was two weeks ago.” He paused to blink up at the ceiling for a moment, then refocused on Rory. “Anyway, you’ll do that while I check the work…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 5 months ago
Thankfully it’s not canon for obvious reasons.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 5 months ago
well there is like two ships that are straight… BUT ONE OF THEM IS WITH A BROTHER AND SISTER! THESE PEOPLE ARE TWISTED IN THE MIND!!!!!!)
ngl incest ships are worse for me. Gay ships? Disgusting. I hate them. But at the same time, that’s the way the world is going, and while I don’t agree with it I’m not gonna be surpris…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 5 months ago
@rae oooh! His old friend came to stay where he was, that’s nice!
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Awwww!!!
But in six months he’s moving to Florida for college…..😭😭
At least I have a little brother <333 I love him to DEATH…I literally love him so muchhhh
That is so funny that your MC is named Hallie because (I know I’ve told you this before but Imma say it again hahaha) my little sister’s name is Hallie!!! so it’s just…
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
The pocket thing. XD
Leo
The lorry rolled to a squealing stop. It’s doors swooshed open. Time to move.
Leo braced against the back of the seat in front of him as he helped Rory to his feet. Then they shuffled down the aisle with Silvia and Quincy close behind. The steps squeaked under their feet.
Students filled the sidewalk…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
*Gasp of joy*
He’s perfectly amazing. I love the goggles. They may now end up in his character design. And the tools. Yes. XD
Kinda want to change my profile pic now…
*Suddenly realizes I’ve never done an aesthetic for Leo. Or his book*
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Koshka replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
I enjoyed the ending as well…though not at first! 😂
Yeah, I knew that was probably going to be most reader’s reactions. I actually let one of my non-kp friends read it and I think it majorly confused her. XD
I love your descriptions and adjectives! Some examples: smogish, hard nailed, smutted.
Thanks!
I am curious, though. How did Timon a…
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Ok! That will be something I’ll add to my notes. 👍
Yay! Thank you!!
@savannah_grac2009
Girllll, you’re so sweet!!! 🤪🥰 Seriously, your reaction really means a lot. 😊
That was actually kinda my goal—I wanted this story to be someone’s comfort book, because I loosely based a few aspects of it off of my comfort books. (I’m no…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 5 months ago
What are your thoughts on catholic reconciliation? (For those who don’t know, reconciliation is where catholics go (supposed to be at least every month) to confess their sins. And then they are forgiven for them.) And what questions do you have. (That definition is the most simple version, there is more to it.)
I basically a…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 5 months ago
Praying as well! <3
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 5 months ago
Praying for him!! <33
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
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