@felicity
Active 10 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Koshka replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Wow. That sixth story was dark, but I know it’s needed.
It’s sad how many people indulge in self harm just “trying to feel”, but since it looks “normal”, like tattoos, piercings, or extreme diets, other people don’t see it for what it is.
My warning wouldn’t be that it’s dark or violent, but that you don’t want to even…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
On the topic of the sixth story: My cousin went through a self-harm attempt once. I don’t know about the details, but she is still alive so that’s gotta count for something. That story is kinda personal to me now that I see something that could drive someone over the edge.
When I have bad days, days where it seems so dark and hopeless, I…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 Arcane and Alder are good name switches! I like them. Also, are you going to keep the Payne and Pythonos references? I think you should; when you publish your book people will be like “oh, this is an expansion on that universe.”
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
also I read your next few chapters!! They’re great!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@hybridlore thanks!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
It’s true! The way you write… I can see it all clearly in my mind! It really IS like a movie!
Gotta agree with Ellette on this. You write very clearly.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
@the_lost-journal I got recommended the exact same stuff bruhhhh
I think it had something to do with the video itself. The genre, style, length of the video, etc.
but Ellette is right, they usually have nothing to do with what you actually want lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle AHAHAHAHAHA
*more wheezing laughter*
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Koshka replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
*Cracks knuckles*
First off, that sounds awesome.
Second, Thursday? That’s a pretty tight crunch, but you can do this. Right? Right.
I’ll read through and give what thoughts I have ect. and (if you’d like) typos/errors I catch. What type of accountability do you want? I can email you daily, you can email me, whatever you…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago

I was watching animations on YouTube (sometimes it inspires me to do stuff with my own) and I had to meme this still as soon as I saw it.
has this ever happened to you, and were you more of Engineer or Sniper in this situation?
on a side note Snipes is just the least photogenic character ever (facial expression wise anyway) and I love him…[Read more] -
Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 2 months ago
@stephie
Oh yes, I’ll be praying! <3@theducktator
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 2 months ago
@theducktator oh that’s awesome!!
also his job sounds cool.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
@stephie hahaha!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
also for some reason I like Emmerich better than Eldred as a name, good choice.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@theshadow I have no idea lol
obviously they’d have like separate rooms, but I think each couple has a cabin to their own. I imagine each person’s room has stuff they enjoy in it—for example, Sniper’s probably has a place he can store his rifle and knife, a large window to the outside (he seems like the kind of person to enjoy that), and som…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
@theshadow yep.
also what’d you think of the two digitally redone drawings I posted earlier? They’re on the last couple pages.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
@the_lost-journal lol, that’s okay.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Rainbows, unicorns, and random questions in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 2 months ago
Is it (ever) morally acceptable to tell someone that their religion is false or that their god doesn’t exist?
Y’know, I’m wondering if it might actually be worse to not explain that their beliefs are false.
But you must go about it tactfully. Saying stuff like that straight out will probably get you in trouble more likely than not. Yo…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
here’s the finished product of what I showed earlier!! I spent WAYYYY too long finalizing the shading….and now that I look at it from afar I can barely see any of it
but I’m not gonna go back and do any more work on this drawing or I’ll never be happy with it.So yeah.My dad said it looked like a freeze frame of an animation, and my mom ask…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
@the_lost-journal yesss Pascal is the best, and they worked Rapunzel’s powers into it quite well.
My only critique is why didn’t they cut the hair farther down…? Because her hair at the end of the movie…
To be fair though, Flynn/Eugene was kinda dying and just wanted to chop her hair off so her “mom” couldn’t take advantage of her anymore, so y…[Read more]
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