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@savannah_grace2009

Oh and you asked for the plot 🤦🏻‍♀️ Oops. XD Here’s the blurb for the trilogy:

They’ve been trapped inside The Orb for twenty years. It covered all of Aletheia. But it slowly closes in on the nation. The people stuck inside have no way to communicate to those outside. Families are separated. But the people have gotten used to…

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@savannah_grace2009

Thanks so much!!

Yeah, for sure! I do have the first draft of the first book posted somewhere on here, but it’s changed a lot since then. I’m actually planning to post the third draft as I edit it soon.

@savannah_grace2009

Ok, Marcurious sounds like a really cool character. 😁

@euodia-vision

Aww, thanks girl! I guess I haven’t really shared much writing on here lately. But I’ve started on the first draft of the second book, so I’ve been getting a lot more actual writing done. (Instead of just editing… editing… editing… 😂)

@savannah_grace2009

Do you mind if Hedieh finds Ottoline? Because she hasn’t really interacted with any of the other girls yet.

@spinnner4him

I love the theme and the story idea!! The only thing I’d be careful about is making the plot cliched. Some cliches aren’t bad it’s just something to look out for, especially on this story idea. But I also don’t know how you’re planning to go about writing it, or the actual details of the plot. Anyway, if you post anything about it…[Read more]

@esther-c

Thank you! 🙂

@savannah_grace2009

You’re welcome!

You should totally read them!

The villains are human mutant sorts, who have been turned into lizards. They also elongate ssss’s like your character does!

“These ssstinky humansss” would be a common phrase 🤣

They are a christian fantasy allegory by Andrew Peterson. Themes are great, characters are great, the…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @grcr

These look awesome, you guys!!

@spinner4him

It sounds really interesting! I’d think I’d have to know a little bit more to make any suggestions, since this is just the blurb, but it sounds awesome!

As for title ideas… I have no idea. XD The others’ suggestions are good. I’m terrible at coming up with titles. 😂

@mineralizedwritings

Aww, I love that!! Tauren and Lesli’s dynamic is one of my favorites. 🥰

@savannah_grace2009

I’d love to read the next part!!

@rae

I like it! I’d say just spend some time developing his character more if you aren’t sure what you want to go for yet. I develop characters by creating their personality and such, then writing…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Thank ya!!

@hybridlore

Thanks!

@savannah_grace2009

Girl your descriptions of emotions are SO good!!

Also your villains remind me of slarb from the wingfeather saga XD

Everton: (tbh, his is probably my most favorite moodboard that I’ve ever made. XD)

Yesss, another moodboard topic!! XD

I have so so many. But for now I’ll just post the moodboards for my MCs

Amidala:

@mineralizedwritings

Ikr? 😂

@trailblazer

Thanks!! 😊

@keilah-h

Oooh, sounds cool!

@savannah_grace2009

Sure thing! Post whatever writing you like!

@esther-c

Lol, Ev and his constant attitude

@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @smiley @hybridlore @keilah-h @trailblazor

Ignore that tag if you’re not interested!

I’ve been working on my second version (Not really draft, it’s a total re-plot) of book 1! Here’s a unedited…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

Hey girl!! Yes it has been forever!! I’m sorry I haven’t been on in…almost 3 weeks 😅 Life’s been crazy. Today is my baby sister’s one year birthday 😭❤😭❤ I love her sooo much, she’s literally the most precious little thing 😭❤ She’s growing up way too fast 🥺

it’s totally fine! In person life is generally more healthy than…[Read more]