Felicity

@ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint @keilah-h @grcr

Thank you guys! It was a lot of fun getting to see all the submissions! 🥰

Don’t worry about it @rae !

Ok! Here’s my comments on each one. I’ll post my drawing below.

Linus-smallprint

You got his facial features pretty well, and I really like how the hat has a bit of droop to it lol. It looks…[Read more]

@theshadow so….we have traded places…..

now you’re telling me to read your story that you’re afraid is a dumpster fire! (Don’t worry, I think yours is great.)

I would go with what @linus-smallprint says about the new paragraphs whenever a character is talking. Look at my fanfic–the google doc separates the paragraphs out a lot, so I’ll…[Read more]

@theducktator

Crosshair

“Well, maybe we could find a way out while we go on a quest. Like, a secret passage full of deadly traps under a moat! I doubt you could get out even if you tried. It’s a well known fact that you can’t escape a fantasy world until the world is saved, and your arc is complete. We’re only at the inciting incident. Unless…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle amazing!

@ellette-giselle I’m still reading!

I agree with Elishavet that there were many books that we checked out at the library, read, and returned without a whole lot of impact.

And oh yes, I hated it when a character was embarrassed, but then I hated to be embarrassed myself. I also loved the dangerous parts of books, but I also dearly loved a well finished book. I was also, and still…[Read more]

Now to try and answer your starting questions.

So, what are your thoughts on children’s fiction?

My thoughts? I don’t think there’s room enough to properly answer that question. It would be easier to answer verbally, instead of here. But, in the pith, Children’s fiction, and I mean good children’s writing, is the same as any good writing. There is…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed I like how you took the basic idea of the What If episode and made it your own thing!

@theshadow lol yep

oh and thanks. Which loaf scene exactly? Cause there are a couple haha. What point are you at?

I tried to make it as entertaining as I could. Some of it’s derived from official media the developers of the actual game have put out over the years. The plot of the latter two-thirds or so are from a comic series they made (I don’t…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle haha I think my dad showed me the dog one a while back. poor doggy lol

and ha, that’s a perfect shot of the horse leaping.

@ellette-giselle whoaaa that’s so cool! You recreated a movie poster, I presume??

I’ve tried, but it never looks right.

@esther-c

*Stumbles in through window*

Did I hear Children’s fiction? Middle-grade literature?

*Deep if wobbly curtsey*

A writer and reader of all things such as these at thy service.

@freed_and_redeemed

That dragon is now glaring at me most reproachfully. I don’t think it likes my pencil’s jabbing.

@ellette-giselle @theducktator @anyone-else

Ok! So I have this new-ish WIP idea, but I’m not happy with the plot. The main characters are Audrey and Miles. (Miles is her dad). Basically, Miles had to give up his daughter when she was little for some reason that had to do with his job. Maybe to keep her safe or something? He’s kind of a mix of Eth…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @theducktator

Thanks ladies! Sorry for disappearing on you. I thought I’d have time over the weekend, but it escaped from me and then we had to leave for a worship conference.

BUT, I’m back! I’ll try to explain the plot and the questions I have sometime this afternoon. (:

Dunno who to tag…..

@freed_and_redeemed

I finished reading Freedom’s Fire a little while ago!!!

@freed_and_redeemed

Oh I like it! Girl, your fanfic writing has improved so much!