Faith Q.

@scoutfinch180 Thanks for the tips! Will keep them in mind 🙂

@nova21 And suddenly, in his mind’s eye, there was light.

@gracie-j Ethan’s very underweight, so he’d probably want to change his weight so his brother can stop bugging him about eating.

@nova21 Soviet wants to spend this year’s Christmas alone and think about what he’s done. His family has had a very bad influence on him, causing him to kill someone that he didn’t want to kill.

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Would your character rather find their true love or a suitcase with five million dollars inside?

Cassie & Isaac both want the money, but they end up with each other 😂 #writershavemorefun

@gracie-j

Would your character rather be a slave or the only non-magic user in a magical world?

@devastate-lasting

Would your character rather spend…[Read more]

@gracie-j

Well, I’m kinda going back to the drawing board over break.  I definitely struggle with committing and finishing. 😏

@gracie-j I’m really thankful for ya’ll as well. You’re all so supportive and kind, and have a great sense of humor.

Hmm…I would say I’m thankful that so far everyone in my family has been safe from Covid…as a writer I’m thankful for the story ideas that pop into my head. Without them, I’d have nothing to write about.

@devastate-lasting    Once a year, the sun lines up with the Giving Tree, and once a year, under it’s rustling leaves, a miracle happens.  

@gracie-j Beyond would rather have the support of his family. Family comes first, in his mind. It would be a disgrace to the noble house of Faustus if he didn’t live up to the expectations of the oldest son.

Would your character rather have nice feet or nice hands?

@gracie-j

Oh my gosh, that’s impressive!!!!!!!!

@gracie-j

I’m thankful for this great writing community, too!!  I’m also thankful for Thanksgiving break, which gives me time to actually write during the school year!!! 😂

@gracie-j Nahum’s true love is money, so the latter.

Would your character rather be deprived of their favorite food for the rest of their life or only eat their favorite food for the rest of their life?

I spent the whole night dreaming and woke up with something that I started immediately. Something that I’m most likely going to pants and probably stems from my inner desire to skip school and go find something beautiful in the world. It’s about a class of students that decide to skip school one summer day to go see the ocean. And strangely, a…[Read more]

@annika-c

That’s awesome!!

Well, I’m in the idea stage right now, still coming up with cool stuff for two different book ideas:  fantasy, and thriller/post-apocalyptical. 😊  The basic premises are a little challenging to come up with now, but I can try:

#1–fantasy:  The cultures in this are based off of the ancient Viking, Roman, Eg…[Read more]

@annika-c

Welcome!!  Your story sounds intriguing. 😃  Wow, 65k words!  Since it’s on it’s fourth draft, do you think it’ll be finished soon?

@nova21 Alix would choose to go to Norway, she prefers cold weather.

@scoutfinch180 The Annihilator would choose to spend an hour who talks too little. He himself doesn’t talk much, either.

Would your character rather use a tablet or a phone?

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I’m on both forums, so I knew that I would do that, haha!! 😁  Yes, I meant KP, but said SE.

@writerlexi1216 Ooh, nice! J.K. Rowling has a nice writing style. Shorter chunks also give varying results! ^-^

1st section:

1)  I like the opening sentence 😉

2)  In the second paragraph, I think it would flow better if you shortened some of the sentences by omitting unnecessary words/details or splitting the sentences into two sentences

3)  “The loud whirring of the distant, useless generator breaking broke the howling of the wind through jagged pea…[Read more]

@scoutfinch180

Hey!!  I was thinking I could look through each post if you wanted me to and proofread each separately (so I don’t write all the changes in one long post).  Sound good?

@writerlexi1216

Hello!!  Welcome to KP!  I’m Ella and I used to be homeschooled, but now I go to a classical Christian school.  I loooovve cats, working out, basketball, listening to music, and writing thriller/suspense/dystopian books.  My cat is a brindle named Jasmine and she’s super sassy! 😂

I know everyone’s asked you a lot of questions alr…[Read more]