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Lydia S. replied to the topic Some of my art 🙂 in the forum Art 4 years, 12 months ago
Aww, thx!
I know! It can be so sad to let a villain go. I know my main villain (the one who leads Aidyl further astray and prompts her to join him) is one of my favs due to his personality. He’s quirky, pessimistic, sarcastic, and generally very fun to write for. But my coauthor and I made the decision to let him go. It’s sad to wat…[Read more]
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Lydia S. replied to the topic Multiple Protagonists in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 12 months ago
I think having multiple POVs is totally fine, and it’s my opinion that it can even make your story better! You get to hear from different people who feel, think, and act in different ways and experience different events. This can add layers to your story. I have multiple POVs in most of my novels. In one of them, I think I have s…[Read more]
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic character relationship, input please!! in the forum Characters 4 years, 12 months ago
I use the term “proofreader” because I haven’t really done the research on what the different stages are called XD Here’s a helpful article that I just found on Beta Readers though! These are the first people who go in and make suggestions, point out inconsistencies, characters acting odd, where they felt like skimming, etc. This is also what I’m…[Read more]
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic character relationship, input please!! in the forum Characters 4 years, 12 months ago
@elfwing I’m honestly hooked!! Let me know if you ever want a proofreader XD
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic character relationship, input please!! in the forum Characters 4 years, 12 months ago
And that before-the-ball scene was fantastic too XD It made me giggle. Thanks for sharing!!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic character relationship, input please!! in the forum Characters 4 years, 12 months ago
@elfwing I seriously love that poem, too!! It really transports me back to another time and makes me think of battles and sailors and warriors and just– ehjwajewk I love itttt!!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic character relationship, input please!! in the forum Characters 4 years, 12 months ago
I’m so sorry, I saw you tagged me the first time but I forgot to look XD
Girlll I love thiss!! I’m honestly super hooked now! It wasn’t overly dramatic at all!
One thing that did stick out a bit was her friend’s eyes ‘seemed to glow an unearthly white’. I’m not sure if that’s literal or figurative haha. Other than that though I loved it!
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Kads replied to the topic Multiple Protagonists in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 12 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Yeah! It’s totally fine. 😀 Oh, that’s super cool! Sounds like you’ve got the setup of everything figured out! 😉 (Btw I saw your new website and love it!)
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Cover Design in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 12 months ago
@lydia-s Yaaaay!!! And it’s fine!! (Took me a while to respond to u now 🤣) I’m so glad you like it!!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Cover Design in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 12 months ago
@gracie-j I did your blog tag!! It’s up now!
@joy-caroline @rmarcher @mkfairygirl
I tagged y’all in it!!
also Joy I wanna do your tag, only thing is idk if I know thirteen (or however many) ppl to tag! Lol!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Multiple Protagonists in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 12 months ago
@scripter-of-kingdoms Ooh that makes me feel so much about cuz that’s about the same number I have. About 7 (eight if u count an animal sidekick). The way mine is working tho is a new character is introduced in each book until you teach book 5 (so books1-4 introduce new characters. That stay throughout the rest of the series
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Kads replied to the topic Multiple Protagonists in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 12 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Lol, in one WIP of mine I have eight MCs, and all of them are POV characters. There are 2 that are somewhat more prominent than the others, but still. Eight MCs. I think it’s totally fine to have any amount of MCs! There’s no specific structure you have to conform to–readers like new, unprecedented things anyways. I think it’s…[Read more]
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Kads replied to the topic Why do you write? in the forum Topic of the Week 4 years, 12 months ago
@anatra23 Oh my word… the thing you said about your world crumbling… it’s true. I feel the exact same way. I showed some of my poetry to my best friend and felt terrible about it afterwards because that stuff takes a good look at things I think about, things in my mind, haha.
Yepppp. Mind-wandering is the best part of getting ideas!
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Lin replied to the topic Multiple Protagonists in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 12 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Ok, cool, that makes things easier for you. For my current work I’ve had multiple POVs, like, a lot, and they’re mainly all main or secondary characters. For my last thing I tried to do one POV per chapter, switching in an orderly way, but for this one I’m doing whatever feels right. Your main characters would have more POV…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Multiple Protagonists in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 12 months ago
@devastate-lasting 3rd person limited is what I’m trying to do.
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Lin replied to the topic Multiple Protagonists in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 12 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Are you doing third or first person POV? With third you can do pretty much anything you want, with first it takes a lot of skill to pull off more than one POV, much less seven.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Multiple Protagonists in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 12 months ago
Thanks y’all! Also I have done my first draft with the names of the charries as the chapter titles, but my thing with that is some chapters would be real short and choppy then cuz sometimes they’re in the same scene but one needs to have a POV of something but so does the other of something else in the same scene ya know? So I’ve decided some…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 started the topic Multiple Protagonists in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 12 months ago
@not-so-secret-secret-assassin
@scripter-of-kingdoms @lewilliams@ribbonash @imwritehere1920 @beth-darlene @lydia-s @buildsbygideon@devastate-lasting @relia @iluvhim18@jodi-maile @daisy-torres@godlyfantasy12 @jenwriter17 @lucy@millennium @kayleigh-idea  @seekjustic…[Read more]
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Kads replied to the topic Salvete scriptores! in the forum Start HERE 5 years ago
@sparrowhawke Yeah, it’s so nice-sounding! I love it XD
XDD I will! 😉 those plot bunnies can be so elusive oh man XDD
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Kads replied to the topic Why do you write? in the forum Topic of the Week 5 years ago
@elfwing Oh noo…… XD That sucks. Yo, that’s awesome! I’m the same way. 🙂 I actually just daydream about my characters and then write scenes sometimes which is cool, haha. Vivid imaginations are the best! 😀
Ah… I was thinking about an OC I had made up, a persona for Legend of Zelda. I was thinking about what she’d be like if she was in a…[Read more]
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