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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 2 months ago
@Catwing I was temporarily engaged. I’ll start in a moment.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 2 months ago
All I can think of to do is heap more sorrow on Courageous. Poor boy.
Oh that’s really cool! Our property is just a little smaller than that (45 acres, I think).
We do use acres, but I think the official measurement is hectares, which are much larger. The confusing thing about Australia is that website had imperial system in living…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 2 months ago
Hello! I’ll probably need a word war to get through this part. Its rathet miserable.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 2 months ago
😀 sometimes I’m not sure 🙂 I’d definitely find it annoying if someone kept tagging me and I couldn’t reply.
Cool.
Well, I’m 20k into my story (only 12k in NaNo though) so it feels like its going well, but my story seems kinda dead to me.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 2 months ago
Okay.
Anyone else around @valtmy @rochellaine
(Sorry to keep annoying you guys. I’ve missed you in the…day…two days? I’ve been gone)
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 2 months ago
It’ll actually be a little longer before I’m here 🙁
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 2 months ago
@Rochellaine @catwing @valtmy @ariel-ashira @jenwriter17
I’ll be here in 15min or so. Anyone care for a word war?
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 2 months ago
I haven’t looked at Google today.
I can testify that we have Australian holiday/anniversary etc ones, so I think some of them are the same and some probably aren’t.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 2 months ago
The list of things I have to research is so incredibly long. And I want to research everything before I write, which is probably a bad habit. Anyway, I made a note in my file, so that I’ll remember to research Linderhof Palace at a later date. I’m trying to dig back into writing now, since I only have twenty or so minutes before I need to leave.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 2 months ago
Of course it matters. It’s a fantastic way to procrastinate, so of course I’m going to take it 😛
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 2 months ago
I’ve decided they could, feasibly, do it. But whether or not they had enough money…then again, a lack of money never stopped royals, did it?
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 2 months ago
Yes. It’s an extremely beautiful palace and I’m trying to decide whether colonists could build something similar in 150 years. I haven’t decided yet.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 2 months ago
Hello! I’m currently staring dully at pictures of Linderhof Palace and trying to find out how long it took them to build it.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 2 months ago
I thought there was. The writing in ROF wasn’t bad but I thought it was rather lackluster compared to QOD. It wasn’t as funny and wasn’t really distinctive. Its an older work isn’t it? I’d say your voice has probably just improved.
I’m sure its been established that Courageous needs whipping into shape himself and is probably not capable…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 2 months ago
I liked it and I definitely think it has potential but I think it would need to be rewritten. The writing didn’t seem as good as in QoD and the characters didn’t seem as well developed, but maybe that’s just because its shorter.
Courageous’s court, was what I meant. It basically goes round on the ideals of courtly love.
Yes, I suppose so. I…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 2 months ago
Well, I don’t think Juqing would like Courageous and he certainly wouldn’t like Courageous court. Whether Courageous would like Juqing or not, I’m not sure.
And yes, I think Juqing would definitely bully Courageous, and Courageous would probably run away to Antarctica.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 2 months ago
I requested access 😀
I thought we came to the conclusion that he would be bullied horribly. But, the poor boy is bullied anyhow, so its just a matter of whether it would be better or worse.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 2 months ago
There’s exceptions to every rule. But the time jumps are less noticeable in the book than the movie/musical because there’s so much extra stuff in there.
Honestly, I think its one of those tools that can be used very well and effectively, but often isn’t.
Most certainly 🙂
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 2 months ago
Huh, they’re all out of whack. That’s really weird.
Yeah, I think there would be people who wouldn’t enjoy your style, but once I got into it I really enjoyed it.
I have seen people do those time jumps in published books, personally I’ve never really liked it, but that could just be me. Still, I think you can make it work.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 2 months ago
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