@evelyn-collins
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Esther replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 2 days ago
I’m not 100% sure either 🤣
Ok that makes sense! 😉 Yeah, I could always take a snippet of it and write it how I would interpret a four year old thinking through that if you wanted an example. (i don’t know if that’s weird or not 😂)
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Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 weeks, 2 days ago
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Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 weeks, 2 days ago
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Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 weeks, 2 days ago
@peoplessss
Sharing the three moodboards from my current WIP! (First is the book moodboard, then Clayton, then Audrey)
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Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 weeks, 2 days ago
Ok….Werner looks like he’d be a favorite character of mine… 🤭 Lmk if you post any snippets of him!!
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Esther replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 2 days ago
Oooh, I like it!! My only critique is the first half of the chapter…. It was great until I found out Sef was only 4 at this point. It just felt a little too complex to be coming from a 4 year old, ya know? Maybe simplify it somehow? Keep the same emotions that Sef is feeling, but see if you can bring it down to a 4 year o…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 2 weeks, 2 days ago
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😁
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Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 weeks, 2 days ago
Ooohhhh, interesting….👀
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Esther replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 2 weeks, 2 days ago
This looks interesting! I can’t promise I’ll be able to keep up, but I might just stalk the topic. We’ll see!
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Esther replied to the topic How Many MCs/POV Characters Is Too Many? in the forum Characters 2 weeks, 2 days ago
I agree with what hybrid and highscribe said. Definitely consider the length and genre of your book first. If your novel is only going to be 60-70k, I would definitely hesitate adding more POV characters cuz then they each only get 10-15k each and that’s really not a lot in the big scheme of things.
Also consider if each c…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 weeks, 2 days ago
Oh no, my prayers will definitely be with you and your family. 🙏🏻 Sending virtual hugs your way! 🫂💕
“fear not, for I am with you; be not dismayed, for I am your God; I will strengthen you, I will help you, I will uphold you with my righteous right hand.”
Isaiah 41:10 “I sought the Lord, and he answered me and delivered me from…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 3 days ago
Caught up on my snowballs!
Nowwww….
@lightoverdarkness6 @loopylin @freed_and_redeemed @godlyfantasy12 SNOWBALLLSSSSS!!!
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Esther replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 3 days ago
Thanks!! <3 :))
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Esther replied to the topic Early 1900s Research in the forum Historical 2 weeks, 3 days ago
Oh dear, I love studying history, but I normally don’t go out of my way to find big books about it 😂 But I’ll do some looking and see if I can find anything that you might find helpful. :))
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Esther replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 3 days ago
Guys I’ll catch up on my snowballs later today I promiseeee
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Esther replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 3 days ago
Yes, I love writing him 🥰 Here’s his moodboard:
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Esther replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
She’d definitely want to know if someone else was describing him like that 😳😂
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Esther replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Oh yes… 😏 He’s one of the MCs in my current WIP, but this snippet was from the POV of his girlfriend (pretty much fiancée, let’s be real gang). 😜
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Esther replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
🫸🏻⚪️ @liberty
🫸🏻⚪️ @savannah_grace2009
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Esther replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Forgot about my snowballs, but got them written! I know I don’t have to share a snippet buuuuut….. I really want to. 🤣 So here you go:
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“Don’t try to turn her down.” Mrs. Palmer stood beside me, a knowing smile on her lips.“Who?”
“Marzia. This is her way of accepting you into the family. She’ll be offended if you don’t let her spoil you.”…[Read more]
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