Evelyn collins

@freedomwriter76

Have you RPed next for Will/the brothers, or did I miss it?

(I think my last RP is on pg. 348)

@princesachronicle22

Anwyn cringed, knowing that it was the sound of the strange foot coverings these savages chose to wear.

*gasp* Oh my word, is she talking about shoes?? That’s awesome!! XD I felt confused like she was at our human world, but in a good way. I could really see the world through her eyes, so great job!! 😄

As for the t…[Read more]

@acancello

I really like it!! I get a feel for the characters even more than the other way you had it. (For me, getting a feel for the characters is really important. 🙂 ) I loved the description!! 😄 Great job!!

@mineralizedwritings

I think the first one is pretty good, but I think they all need to be more parallel. (This is something I’ve struggled with in naming the books in my trilogy) It always depends on the series in how your naming them. For example, the titles from WFS are exactly parallel. On the Edge of the Dark Sea of Darkness, North! Or Be Ea…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

Aww I love the sunrise part! And sweet Ami…and Ev!!

Yes, I love those two!! 🥰

These two paragraphs were my favorites. You did them so amazingly well! I love how she’s realizing that God created it, and thanking him for it with her joy. ❤❤❤

Thank you so much!!! 😊❤️

I love how Ami views nature like that. (I have another cha…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I love that!!! I could really see the sunrise in my head, and it was sooo good!!! AMAZING job, girl!!! 💖💖💖💖

Thank you so much!!! 😄😊🥰❤️

That means a lot!! ❤️

@thearcaneaxiom

How well simulated is the Orb’s sunrise? Would it look cartoonishly fake? Like a yellow spot going up and down, or does the Orb make it look far more like t…

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@lightoverdarkness6

Aww thank you SO MUCH!!! Yeah it was nervewracking writing it…lol. Ah good! I’m so glad you liked it!! 🙂 ❤️❤️

Lol

Of course!!! <3

@lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision @thearcaneaxiom @princesachronicle22 @gwyndalf-the-wise @whalekeeper @loopylin @anyone-else-who-cares-to-critique

Hey, y’a…[Read more]

@acancello

Alrighty! 👍 😀

@mineralizedwritings

oh, just finished it!

Woo-hoo!! 😄 XD

XDXD This is literally my oc’s Tauren and Lesli. She’s been doing that to him since he was little and won’t stop now that he’s a foot taller than her lol. ( I mean if he asked her to she probably would)

That’s awesome!! 🤣

@godlyfantasy12

That sounds really cool and unique!! I really like that!! 😄

I really need to worldbuild more. XD The history part was easy cuz it was based off of America, but I want the customs to be more unique and that will take more work. Lol

@acancello

I pretty much was thinking what @mineralizedwritings was, I just couldn’t say it as well as she does. XD

From this beginning, I can already get a feel for the personality of the POV character. (Who I’m assuming is Shauna 😉 ) If you share more, please tag me! I’d love to read more and hear more about your story!! 😀

@livingwoodchronicles

Welcome back, Ky!! So glad you’re back! 😀

I guess I shall introduce myself in case you don’t really know who I am. I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, God-loving, amateur writer!!

I’ve heard a little about your book from you on here and it sounds really intriguing!! I’ll have to read it s…[Read more]

@godlfantasy12

Also, Grimm looks amazing!!! His eye color is like, super cool!! It’s like a silver-blue. I love it!!

And if I come up with anything concerning the greetings in A’Grend, I’ll let ya know! 👍

@lightoverdarkness6

Girl…

That scene…

Was…

AMAZING!!!! 🤩

I really enjoyed reading it and it kept me on the edge of my seat! Can’t wait t…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I’d love to hear about it!! Other writers’ worlds always fascinates me!! 😄

@joy-calle

Anything you want to write about is great. Of course, you can ask me for suggestions if you’re not sure, but you can choose any random writing-related topic you like! You can also do a devotional type of post if you want instead.

Alrighty! 😀

@joy-calle

Adding on to my earlier response:

Would you want articles with a certain topic, or just any topic of my choosing? (All pertaining to writing, of course. 😉 )

@joy-calle

Ooooh. 😏 I may be able to do it. I’ve been thinking about writing an article for KP, so I may be able to do one for your blog. I’ll definitely consider it. 🙂 Once I decide, I’ll let you know! 😀

@godlyfantasy12

maybe a dragon frozen?! Or a “frozen” in gold (dunno what the word is XD)

Not a bad idea… 🤔😆

It would be really cool!!

@lightoverdarkness6

Oh, sorry! I just saw your message. 🙁

Your good! 🙂

Hm, maybe Destry, Fynn and Skyler can join the group too? Or maybe another group…idk 😅.

They don’t have to join any group if y’all’s group is already pretty big. It was just a suggestion because @godlyfantasy12 had mentioned it. Whatever y’all wanna do is fine with me. &#x1f…