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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 1 week ago
Yes, I do every year, except this year because my Mom made canned cranberry sauce…hence why I didn’t eat it because it wasn’t the recipe I like.
I don’t eat it on anything, just straight cranberry sauce.
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Ruth replied to the topic Why did you choose to write about your main character? in the forum Topic of the Week 5 months, 1 week ago
In Guardian Angels
my beloved flopNahim, in his earliest form, was a broken soldier finding healing. At first he was just another character, but eventually, as I got older and hit troubles in my life, I began to morph him into something that resembled some of my thoughts and feelings. He became almost a way of self-expression over the years, b…[Read more] -
Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 1 week ago
It’s not painful to read. You describe things clearly, there are varied sentence lengths, and you suggest emotion at sprinkled points through the sections. You also don’t harp on descriptions, which is something I struggle with.
Thanks.
But stubborn me still hates it (it’s a me problem, I am genuinely thankful)
Also, I really, reall…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 1 week ago
The Protector — Gabriel Mai
Gabriel nodded, his jaw tight, knowing Lucy couldn’t get there in time. He judged the distance, and the closeness of the crows, but before he finished thinking, he sheathed his daggers and scooped Lucy up, apologizing, remembering how she kicked him last time. Then he ran for what felt like the m…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 1 week ago
Lucille
Lucy did not run without the Protector. She grabbed his arm and yanked him forward, pointing. “No – Th-that way!”
The tower had an opening at the base – a scuffed metal lid. She hadn’t noticed it before and now it was far from them both. But the crows’ shadows grew around them and the Protector surely couldn’t fight them off. He…[Read more]
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whaley started the topic Why did you choose to write about your main character? in the forum Topic of the Week 5 months, 1 week ago
Why did you choose to write about your main character?
This is as complicated as it sounds! Characters are multi-faceted and ever-changing, so when faced with this question, it might be hard to answer. Do you write about them because you relate to them, carry a message through them, or simply enjoy their unique existence? It’s different for…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Topic of the Week…? in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 1 week ago
I have never felt so called out
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 1 week ago
It’s painful to read, but thanks I guess.
It’s not painful to read. You describe things clearly, there are varied sentence lengths, and you suggest emotion at sprinkled points through the sections. You also don’t harp on descriptions, which is something I struggle with.
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 1 week ago
It’s painful to read, but thanks I guess.
The Protector — Gabriel Mai
It, indeed, was Lucy. She tumbled unceremoniously from the mass of black feathers. The crow shifted its attention from the shiny silver, to her, and she ran, the crow chasing after her.
Gabriel’s blades were out in a moment, boots digging into the ground as he r…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 1 week ago
Aw man… If it’s any consolation to you, I enjoy reading your rps! You’re doing a great job and if you’re frustrated with something, whatever it is, usually that means you’re getting better.
Lucille
Lucy tumbled over the crow’s back and landed on the ground. The crow’s focus shifted and it instantly chose to stride toward her.
There w…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 1 week ago
@koshka Yeah, that’s true.
I take the revived headcanon too because I like that ending a lot better, but I could see why one might not share that view.
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 1 week ago
The problem is not what I want to write, I just genuinely hate my writing style right now.
The Protector — Gabriel Mai
As the crows above cackled and argued, Gabriel’s attention was drawn to something silver falling from the tower. A crow dived after it, and among its black feathers was a spot of color on its back. Gabriel cal…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 1 week ago
Huntress/Sniper/Soldier
“Yes. Good idea. He was at the entrance of the labyrinth. I think he might be the one who brought us here. As for where he is…” Felicity thought for a second before speaking up again. “Do you know how to trap rabbits?”
“I’ve never done it before, but it shouldn’t be too hard to figure out.” I said.
“C…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 1 week ago
I personally think it’s kinda confusing. His death being undone kinda messes with the fact that the last thing he did was protect his brother, and will it do anything to the Anneiran ex-fangs? But at the same time, how will Kalmar ever be able to get into the Fane of Fire without his Throne Warden? (Artham could help I guess, but I don’t know if…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 1 week ago
ok I didn’t wanna make a new topic for this but I probably should have.
For those of you who are watching and following the Wingfeather Saga show:
How do you think they are going to do the end?
(Spoilers incoming for those who haven’t read the books, SCROLL DOWN QUICKLY!)
(are they gone yet? ok here we go.)
All right, so we have…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 5 months, 1 week ago
I’m so sorry, Sara, but I’m so glad that Jesus has been comforting you during this time! It is truly amazing to hear of how the Lord is taking care of you right now. You’re in our prayers *hugs*
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 5 months, 1 week ago
@whalekeeper you said it better than me, I echo your sentiment.
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whaley replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 5 months, 1 week ago
It’s beautiful to hear how you’ve found joy, Sara. I’m thankful you’ve found peace in this.
Jesus has really felt everything your family is going through. It’s not just that he understands it, he went through it – he cried and suffered and wished for the pain to disappear.
And now, in heaven, Jesus knows the best remedy to…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 5 months, 1 week ago
@savannah_grace2009 I am so, so sorry you had to go through this. But at the same time, I’m extremely glad that it strengthened your faith like that. You’re right–there is no cancer in heaven, and she is perfectly healed! That’s something to be happy about!
I will continue to pray for your family.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 5 months, 1 week ago
Yesterday afternoon, my mom passed away. She’s with Jesus now, and I’m very joyful about that, but I miss her a lot, too.
Something really cool happened though! Saturday night, my cousins on my dad’s side came to visit my mom, and when we went home, one of them spent the night in my room just for fun, and so did my sister.
I’d been going through…[Read more]
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