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Active 11 months, 2 weeks ago- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Okay, I’m all caught up (also was gone for a while), and this is a really engaging story. I did feel sad when Tyler was gone, so good job there, and I like how everything is going.
Thank you so much!!
A few things, I’ve noticed you used something along the lines of “(Character’s name) hated…” to describe what they were feeling, so…
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Enid replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
I have read them. 🙂 I’ve just been gone at a friend’s for the past couple days and haven’t given myself time to respond.
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Enid replied to the topic Rant away! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
I want to rant about theremins. >:3
A theremin is an electric instrument invented accidentally in the 1920s. It is played without any physical contact by the performer. Two antennas create electromagnetic fields, and the performer waves their hand around the antennas to manipulate pitch and volume.
Finding a theremin is hard because there…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
I’m reawakening this topic because I’m putting together a list of magic system questions for myself. (Felt like updating my world bible.) They will be posted here when I’m done!
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Ruth replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 2 months ago
Praying!
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Ruth replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 2 months ago
I got to eat a beef hot dog today 🎉
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Nonhuman Sentient Beings in the forum Fantasy 1 year, 2 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Nice to see you back! (Ha, I know I’ve already talked to you, but still. ;))
I’m not sure I’ll be able to commit to another full project right now, but I might pop in occasionally. So glad you were able to figure out some more stuff this time around, though!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle ok thanks!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle I was just about to tell you I haven’t caught up in a while. Which chapter was the last one I commented on? I should be able to get to it today or tomorrow.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle you’re welcome. Mind if I take the meme to post on my youtube channel on the 4th? They might find it funny.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle PEAK MEME LOLLLLLLL
I love that.
now, to prevent Soldier from deciding the cookies are for him and eating them all (and getting sick afterward)
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
lol, yes!
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Ruth replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 2 months ago
Here’s the last story as it is now. I made a few changes during CEW, but I don’t think I made many
A breeze swept over the countryside, traveling over the hills and through the meadows, before stopping to tangle a young woman’s hair at the command of the man who sat in the grass beside her.
“Baron! Why?” She whined, trying to st…
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
not chapter, story *facepalm*
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
If you want, I would be happy to mark that chapter up for you and give a few spots where it felt emotionally lacking to me as the reader.
That’d be great! I already have made some changes to the first part of the chapter, so I’ll head over to The Baron Chronicles topic and repost the chapter.
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
np
but I honestly really liked that chapter the way it is. Like, a LOT. I don’t want you to touch it. If it’s the chapter I’m thinking of (the end one) it was one of my very favorites.
Yes, the end one. This is very interesting to me, cuz I honestly like the last short story the least. Not because of the story itself (the conce…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 2 months ago
Oh no. Praying!!
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