Ethryndal

I suppose I need to tag someone now…

@seekjustice  Make a one-sentence story out of this picture:

Ohh, thanks for bringing this topic back! I loved it!

Lessee. I’ll do one for that girl with her arms spread out…

“And though she didn’t know it, though He was invisible, He was holding her by the hands like a baby learning to walk.”

How’s that? 😛

@jenwriter17 Thanks. I’m surprised I kept a record (cause normally I don’t end up keeping one.)

December? *shrug*

Also It is nearly 11 so I have to sleep now. Good night.

@rochellaine Sounds very intriguing… Spies. 😀

I’ll probably be on til 10 something EST

@jenwriter17 Okay. 🙂
@seekjustice @rochellaine @alia @dekreel @valtmy I’m writing now.
Also last Wednesday was my first Kapeeferversary. *throws feathers* I’ve been on here a year. 😀

@seekjustice @jenwriter17 @alia @valtmy @rochellaine I am writing my book!
Also I have a poll thingie on my blog if any of you guys wanta do you can. 🙂
Post link to find the poll. So you can see the blog and then play with the questions.

What @seekjustice said is really true, guys. Australia (particularly the state of New South Wales) is really struggling.  If you want to read more about it, follow this link.

http://www.abc.net.au/news/drought/

Also, @seekjustice, I thought you might be interested in this Christian mission’s response to the…[Read more]

Absolutely praying for your friend, @alia, and for you too, as you try to counsel her with wisdom. I’ll be praying for both of you.

@valtmy

I’ll hunt down some books on that then, and set to work reading them while my beta readers finish off the document and I’ve already started doing some serious worldbuilding. I see that as my main things to tackle in the next draft 😀 Thanks for all your input!

@valtmy

I realise that 🙂 though things like the “Premier’s Bill” which Lang gets assassinated over, were things that really happened in Australia during the Depression (though no one was assassinated, as far as I know).

I definitely think that in order to do better worldbuilding for this story, I need to do some amount of study on economics and…[Read more]

@valtmy

The only thing I would say in rebuttal to what you’ve said in your comments though, is that I had quite heavily based the world on the world of the Great Depression. That’s part of the reason there’s such a divide between the rich and the poor and also in the technology. In the Great Depression, the people were living in a world that was…[Read more]

@jenwriter17 Bye!

@jenwriter17 The hardest thing about this one is trying to bring it all together into something that effectively caps off the last two books.

@valtmy Most of it makes sense and a lot of it was said by another beta reader last week. Most of the main critiques have to do with my worldbuilding especially, which I know is pretty subpar.

@jenwriter17

Its coming along slowly, but at least I have something that resembles a plot now.

@jenwriter17 @valtmy

I’m still here, reading over Valtmy’s comments 🙂

@dekreel @seekjustice @valtmy I finished the post for tonight! So I’m going to bed now.

@dekreel 🙂

@valtmy Got it. Thanks so much!

@seekjustice  I guess I’ll try the Google Doc then. 🙂

@dekreel

I don’t mind which you use 🙂 Feel free to go with whatever works best for you.