Esther

@esther-c

@freedomwriter76

I think a general rule of thumb for charecter deaths can be some up in that your character death should cause you (as the author) to be legitimately sad (or at least make you feel in some way) and not just be like well I checked if a box yay. On a topic of if you just want to find a way to add urgency and lack of…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Vaguely xD The one who rescues him from an almost fight I think?? Awesome! you’ll have to tag me if you post about it

@dekreel

Thanks!! 😄

@esther-c

Nice to meet you Esther!! Thanks 😊

Yess, another violin player ! xD

1. Two years in September! Hbu?

2. Haha, yes I could name thirty😂 the hunger games, lunar chronicles,…[Read more]

@esther-c I agree what everyone else has said. If deaths don’t fit with your story then don’t try to force them. It won’t work, it’ll just look sloppy and…well…obviously forced.

That being said, if you’re really set on killing off someone, or multiple someone’s, it doesn’t have to be a Main character.

I have quite a few side/background c…[Read more]

@esther-c

Okay, when I first read that paragraph about Malyk dying, I thought you mean EVERTON was going to die, and I was really sad because I love what I’ve read about him…. (totally not stalking him or anything, lol)

But you didn’t, so we’re good. 😅😁

Aaaanyway, yes, I totally get it. I struggled with killing off any of my charries for a…[Read more]

@esther-c

I’d say, first off the bat, that killing off a character doesn’t automatically make a book better. If you are going to kill off someone, it’s important to have a specific reason – to highlight the power of the villain, finish an arc, make a thematic point – instead of doing it just because you feel like it’ll make things better. I would…[Read more]

@loopylin @keilah-h @esther-c

Eclipse

Azar was itching to follow after Ridley. Eclipse could feel it. At least that would get us away from everyone else, he thought.

Azar let out a nearly imperceptible sigh, glancing around. But then we’d miss all the fun here, he replied. Honestly, there are too many decisions.

Maybe it’d be easier if you…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @esther-c

Calvin

Calvin nodded, with a slow, comforting smile. “Totally fine. I guess I get pretty scary when I’ve been up for forty-eight hours straight.”

Then, to Wolfgang – “Sorry about Marcel, too. He won’t apologize when he’s grumpy.”

@whalekeeper kk! @freedomwriter76 @esther-c

Paxton

Paxton stared at the boy’s now outstretched arms, thankful he was asking and not just grabbing him.

Because in truth…Paxton wasn’t quite feeling up to hugging him at the moment.

Not that he wanted to be rude…he just…didn’t really know him.

And the idea of being in close contact with someon…[Read more]

@whalekeeper XD I do luv ur charries @freedomwriter76 @esther-c

Paxton

Paxton stared at the boy’s now outstretched arms, thankful he was asking and not just grabbing him.

Because in truth…Paxton wasn’t quite feeling up to hugging him at the moment.

Not that he wanted to be rude…he just…didn’t really know him.

And the idea of being in close co…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @esther-c

Marcel

What a cry baby.

Marcel snorted, and punched Cal’s arm. “Let’s go find a wreck room or something.”

The tired circles around Cal’s eyes seemed to expand, like a raccoon’s. He ignored Marcel, and pushed forward. “Hey, don’t blame Fynn. It was my idea to jump him. If you want to pick a fight with…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @esther-c

Sorry about not replying sooner. This week was hectic. Anyway. Gimme till tomorrow morning at the latest.

@lightoverdarkness6 @freedomwriter76 @esther-c @loopylin

Anyone on and wanna chat?

@hybridlore

Alrighty, I’m going to tag some people now XD. I usually forget to, lol

@gwyndalf-the-wise @thearcaneaxiom @landric @awsumfaith @smiley @esther-c @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @mineralizedwritings @godlyfantasy12 @keilah-h @all-those-i-have-forgotten

@esther-c XD IK!! Lol!! Who knows… ur Nadirs are…def uhh different then mine XD XD although November redeems the family name so ya know

@folith-feolin

Cool 👍

@kyronthearcanin

Thanks! I have mermaids already, and I agree, they can be creepy sometimes 😬 😂

@esther-c

Okey dokey 👍

@godlyfantasy12

*Gasp* I’ve been waiting to hear about November!!!!

*Steals a handful of @esther-c ‘s popcorn*

*And a cookie*

@esther-c

*snags some of esther’s snacks*

YAY NOVEMBER!

@keilah-h @gwyndalf-the-wise @awsumfaith @esther-c @princesachronicle22 @lightoverdarkness6 @thearcaneaxiom @euodia-vision @loopylin @kyronthearcanin @whalekeeper @joy-calle @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76

OH MY GOSH I AM BACK TO THIS FORUM XD XD!!! That I created…

OK OK OK!!! Getting back on track…

I have already Posted Ara’s character,…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @whalekeeper @esther-c

I think the main convos I need to finish before starting the next day is Arthur and Corvina and Paxton and them SOOO

Paxton

Paxton hid slightly as one of the boys came over…

Fynn, if he’d caught the name right.

The boy apologized, though at first it didn’t seem all that sincere. Not that Paxton was e…[Read more]