Esther

@esther-c @grcr @trailblazer @savannah_grace2009 @mineralizedwritings @everyone!

=-=–=-=-Hugo=-=-=-=

Hugo Searched everywhere for Ottoline. Under the tables, around the food buffet, around all the dancers, and finally, finally, he saw her coming out of the basement, holding hands with Hedieh.

“Ottoline!” He cried out in relief, “where were…[Read more]

@esther-c

Looks great, girl! Good job on the boards and the blurb!!

@grcr

Hey, did you ever figure out something for Nanowrimo? I might be able to help with inspo if you still need something, though writing prompts is a great idea!

@esther-c

OoOoOo!!! I am very intrigued!

So are the two characters you introduced inspired by… middle-eastern culture?

And I would love to hear more! I’m fine with spoilers. XD

@rae @mineralizedwritings @esther-c

Here’s a new scene I’m working on. Thoughts? Concerns?

She ran across the prairie. She didn’t know where she was going, and she didn’t care. Running helped her to forget…to forget last night, and all the other nights like it.

“Scream all you want…ain’t nobody gonna here you…” she could still feel the welts…

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@savannah_grace2009 @grcr @rae @acancello @mineralizedwritings @esther-c

I’m fine with it, but I haven’t dabbled in fantasy/medieval writing very much so I might not be as active in the RP. Howeverrrr I’ve read some, so hopefully I won’t get stuck too much lol. Kari’s a big reader/writer, so she’s already kinda wondering if she stepped through a…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @grcr

Hi!! I’m so sorry I haven’t been on in forever (Maybe its only been like 3 days, but still a long time 🙂 ) So… I have been crazy, crazy busy. Like, I even went to my first barn dance in my new town and there were almost 100 high schoolers🤯 Personally I love to hang out with people so I went without knowing anyone :D…[Read more]

@esther-c

Ooo Sounds very interesting…

@esther-c

Oh and if you want to know spoilers, I will gladly indulge. XD Plus, Amir has a love interest if anyone wants to hear about that… 🥰

Sooo…what’s the big secret about Amir’s parents?

@esther-c

Pretty much. (Along with plotting a new WIP for NaNo… 😏)

Good! I’ve been editing directly on the doc, but I think I’m going to print it out and edit it by hand. That might help me see things better.

Ooooh, what is this NaNo WIP???

Ah yes, editing by hand is a good way to do it! 😉

@savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @mineralizedwritings @rae @acancello

Kari

A bang from the basement drew Kari’s attention to the basement door. What could that noise be? A gunshot? Her stomach twisted into a knot, and as she looked around the room, she realized Ottoline was missing, and come to think of it, so was that new girl. Alarm bells rang in…[Read more]

@acancello @mineralizedwritings @rae @trailblazer @esther-c

I will not allow this RP to die!!!!

haha

who wants to write the next RP?

@savannah_grace2009 @esther-c
Alright I’ll be sure to tag both of y’all!

@esther-c

Thanks! Yeah, I totally get that. I’m hopefully going to post Chapter One soon.

@esther-c

If you print it out/read it out loud to someone, it helps a lot with forcing yourself to read the whole thing instead of just skimming over it because you know what happens. It also helps with finding mistakes and sentences that could go more smoothly.

(I know you probably won’t want to read your WHOLE BOOK out loud, trust me, your…[Read more]

@esther-c

Aww, thanks girl! I guess I haven’t really shared much writing on here lately. But I’ve started on the first draft of the second book, so I’ve been getting a lot more actual writing done. (Instead of just editing… editing… editing… 😂)

Of course! OH YAY!! So has editing book one been the main thing? How has it gone?

@savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore @esther-c @whoever-else

There is something really wrong with this scene. I can’t figure it out at all. Help!

“I told you not to go anywhere.” Mandin was half-laughing.

Nahim turned around suddenly, forgetting his helmet rested in the flowers beside him. Mandin froze, a look of shock in his features.

“What is th…

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@savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @whoever (I never know who to tag.)

NAHIM

Everyone before had seemed to see him as some scary monster with that sword in his hand, and when he had tried to cut down the door it had gotten worse.

Now he had let his sword dangle limp from its usual place on his belt. He had set his helmet beside himself on the floor,…[Read more]

@esther-c @acancello @trailblazer @grcr @rae @mineralizedwritings

Ottoline

“Ottoline! Where are you?” Hugo’s voice echoed down the stairwell. His voice contained some sort of urgency. “Ottoline!” She heard his footsteps coming down the stairs. “There you are,” he sighed when he saw her and smiled his crooked smile that never failed to make…[Read more]

@esther-c @trailblazer

Yeah, it does end abruptly. I really don’t like this chapter, lol. I guess….more EDITING! SO MUCH FUN!!!! (not.)

@hybridlore

Maybe something like that? I mean, Lilitu already described what happened, sort of, and I feel like it gets a little graphic in the actual flashback part. But it’s really up to you, if you feel l…

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