@esther-c
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Hallie NO. I spent that whole scene with that sinking feeling that a character was about to do something stupid and she did. *sigh*
She felt petite next to him, although she had never been the tallest girl around at five feet four inches.
Antonio wasn’t that tall. Hallie guessed that he couldn’t be over five feet ten inches.
My dad is…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Got it, thanks! Alright, it seems like we’re going to be missing some people either way 🙁. We’ll probably just have to pick the one that will be able to support the most people.
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hybridlore replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
@theshadow @grcr @whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @keilah-h (Is this something you would be interested in? I can’t remember if you responded.) @stephie @trailblazer @esther-c @highscribeofaetherium @i’m-sure-i-forgot-someone-so-consider-yourself-tagged-sorry!
I’m thinking about plann…[Read more]
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year ago
Your house is still standing I hope?
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RAE replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year ago
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year ago
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
ahhhh, Cody’s “Tantono” sent such a warm feeling through my heart… that was so cute!! ❤️
[…] with a side of guilt for what she couldn’t quite figure out.
Hallie… you know why. don’t give me that.
“Can I kiss you goodnight?”
Excuse me? In front of her father’s house?? Uhm, absolutely not! lol kidding kidding
Just…[Read more]
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Loopy posted an update 1 year ago
So the doc started glitching because it was so big, so I had to split it up so here’s part 1 of the fantasy school rp doc
https://docs.google.com/document/d/11L_B1ACW_CD2lv40aIt5dkhsaO-i8hlTSg_yt7E7VaE/edit
@godlyfantasy12 @freed_and_redeemed @rae @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @ellette-giselle @esther-c @koshka @euodia-vision @princesachronicle22 @sm…[Read more] -
freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@esther-c @keilah-h @ellette-giselle @rae @hybridlore @theducktator @savannah_grace2009 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @anyone-else-lol
and an extra aesthetic 👀
aka the villain’s aesthetic

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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@esther-c @keilah-h @ellette-giselle @rae @hybridlore @theducktator @savannah_grace2009 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @anyone-else-lol
MC Aesthetics for my fantasy WIP 🤭
MC #1:

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TheShadow replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Poor Hallie, hopefully her siblings don’t embarrass her (right?). Nice job, the chapters are good. One thing I did notice though is that in a couple of sentences you explain why a character is doing something, like “to ___” and I think you could leave that out sometimes for the reader to figure out why they’re doing something for themselves.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
*Slips in* I’ve also met somebody who looks like one of your Hallie faceclaims. 😅 First moodboard, left, with the long red hair. It’s crazy how similar they look. I’ve had this thought since you started using the photo, but never thought to tell you for some reason.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
I TOLD YOU I MET HER IN REAL LIFE!!!!!
Maybe all our writing has come to life and our characters are walking around in different places!! (sounds like a movie or something)
It could be kinda scary if some of my villains got loose. 😂
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Hey guess what?!?
I just ran into your character Hallie the other day!!! NO LIE! She looked EXACTLY like the face claim, she had the same personality from what I’ve read of your book!!!!
It was driving me crazy! She and her fiance were visiting our church and I grantee you I kept sneaking glances at her. She had on a black…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@esther-c same….I reached a bit over 700 and kinda stopped ROFL I have another scene I should be writing but uhh…kinda lost steam XD
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@esther-c ROFLLL Bruh frrr like freedom was on and I said hi and now she’s gone XD
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
I gotta work out exactly how Erich got into the US Army tbh😂🫣 I’m thinking it could’ve been a part of the offer for giving him a shorter sentence or something, but I gotta put more research into it
Or he just joined the Army after he had his sentence.
idk exactly yet. 😅 if I have to change things a bit I…
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
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Wow, this is immense. I can’t believe 16 characters have met by running into each other. XD
I greatly appreciate this! Now I get a chance to read what my peer writers have done. The doc is so massive I don’t think I’ll ever finish part 1, but still
I intend to read this start to finish
Ooo! I like this! Thank you!
I guess my characters come in much later……. I don’t see a code color for them.
@ellette-giselle Ohh yeah I have a lot to go before Rory ever shows up, lol. Probably like 150-200 pages
*Faints*
lololol
Wowwww this is crazy, and it’s only part 1??
lol my charries just disappeared a while back ago. I should put them back in, but I was only thinking of doing that at the dance. Funny that it took us like 2 years to roleplay what, three days?
@keilah-h
Well I think technically there was a point people skipped a few weeks in between some of the days? Idk the timeline is wonky. But yes it is taking a while XD
I’m excited to see your characters again at the dance!
yeah me too! I hope someone notifies me when it’s gonna start lol
Don’t worry I plan on tagging everyone who’s ever shown interest in the dance when it starts
yay!
@loopylin You. Are. Amazing. 💜 thank you so much for doing this, I can’t wait to read back through our shenanigans😂
Ahh Loopy this is fabulous 😂 You’re the best. Definitely deserve the title of official KP archivist 💅
Thanks guys! 😊 Whaley deserves half the credit too. She’s been helping me.