@esther-c
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Three Ducks in a Trench Coat replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 months, 4 weeks ago
Sorry, I just realized I never replied to your explanation of contemporary churches.
Ours will normally follow the same pattern of announcements, we have a time of worship through song, then the sermon, then we’ll end with another song and sometimes Communion. This can change depending on the Sunday, but that’s the normal structure we…
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 4 weeks ago
Well, I made the forum, the forum stopped working for me, and I also disappeared off the face of the earth for over two weeks😂💀 well I’ll try to answer questions/responses now😅
@highscribeofaetherium @hybridlore @keilah-h @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @elishavet-pidyon @theshadow @thearcaneaxiom @whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @loopylin @koshka @trailbl…[Read more]
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Potato reporter replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 months, 4 weeks ago
I find those funny, tbh. XD As long as they’re not being disrespectful of the Bible or God, then I don’t have a problem with it.
Yup! I saw one that I thought was going to be disrespectful, but it actually but christianity in the light! (in a good way)
I don’t believe there’s anything in particular that’s wrong or that just because t…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 4 weeks ago
Girllll, you’re so sweet!!! 🤪🥰 Seriously, your reaction really means a lot. 😊
Awwww ofccc!!!!
That was actually kinda my goal—I wanted this story to be someone’s comfort book, because I loosely based a few aspects of it off of my comfort books. (I’m not stealing any of that author’s ideas, I promise!!! just some of the vibes in certain s…
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Three Ducks in a Trench Coat replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 4 weeks ago
Found it! 🙃
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 4 weeks ago
@ESTHER-C
OMC THIS IS GONNA BE LIKE MY COMFORT BOOKI JUST KNOW IT
*curls up in a love seat with a chai latte and gingersnap with a fuzzy blanket and fuzzy socks* (those are the vibes your book gives me)
ALSO I WANT AN OLDER BROTHER SO BAD
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 4 weeks ago
Very interesting! I’ve nothing to say that hasn’t been said by the others. Excited to keep reading!! 😃😄
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Three Ducks in a Trench Coat replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 4 weeks ago
My siblings and I have a very different, unhuggy relationship, XD.
I know what you mean though, and I did feel that this part was a little cheesy… Idk, Easton tends to be that way… I’ll think about it. I’m not sure if it’s like that throughout the rest of the book, so I’ll keep my eyes open.
Yeah, it felt realistic through most of the…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 4 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @raxforge @esther-c @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @theshadow @keilah-h @koshka @freed_and_redeemed @trailblazer @whalekeeper @theducktator @elishavet-pidyon @power
Announcing the winners!!!!
First, like the previous judges, I will go over each story.
Shadow:
What a short, sweet story! You are sucked right into a conflict,…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 4 weeks ago
Hybrid pointed that out to me too. For this chapter specifically, I wanted it to feel pretty fast paced, specifically when she got to the party. Do you think that worked?
Ah, okay then that makes sense. It did work pretty well, the chapter felt fast paced. Not in a bad way though, it introduced the characters and world efficiently.
Let…
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Ellette Giselle posted a new activity comment 2 months, 4 weeks ago
I’d love to but I’m out of town and don’t have access to my computer right now! 😭
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TheShadow replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 4 weeks ago
This was good, nice job. The only thing I would recommend though is using a bit more body language.
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Three Ducks in a Trench Coat replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 4 weeks ago
I enjoyed it, but one question.
“Me too.” Easton walked across the room and gave his sister a tight hug. “Thanks so much, Hallie. Today was amazing.”
She smiled up at him. “You’re welcome.” Anything for an amazing brother like you.
Are they always this nice to each other?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 4 weeks ago
@esther-c wow, that’s a nice beginning!
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Potato reporter replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 months, 4 weeks ago
@keilah-h @rae @ellette-giselle @theducktator @grcr @linus-smallprint @hybridlore@raxforge @whalekeeper @loopylin @arcticanimals @esther-c @jonas and @liberty @savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium @koshka @power@freed_and_redeemed and @thearcaneaxiom!
Hello again everyone! I have a question about some stuff today!
- What are your thoughts…
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Three Ducks in a Trench Coat replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months ago
*gasp* Hallie’s board has an Ender’s Game quote!
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TheShadow replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months ago
Please tag me for when you post the chapters, your boards look so good!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Flash Fiction Critique Needed!!! in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 months ago
@esther-c all righty!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months ago
@esther-c cool!! I’ll totally read it, if only for fun! Might pick out a couple of grammar mistakes here and there or tell you if there’s a better way for a sentence to flow, but other than that I don’t think I’ll be critiquing much.
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Smiley replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months ago
ooooooooohhhh keep me tagged please 😄 I like the vibes of the boards and it sounds really fun!
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Aw man, no worries though!! <33