Esther

@esther-c

I also hope I didn’t come across as rude or brushing you off…I really do appreciate your thoughts because that means I need to work on foreshadowing! And explaining my book to others helps me flesh out my thoughts a little more! Thank you so much! <3

@esther-c

Ok, so the biggest thing I noticed was the lack of hope throughout the story. The characters seemed to think about death a lot and were put through a lot of physical pain. There’s nothing inherently wrong with that, but it needs to be balanced out with hope. When I got to read those Lilitu/Sef memories from when they were little, that w…

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@ellette-giselle

Technically I borrowed them from King’s Daughters Writing Camp. But yes xD

By the way, that’s starting soon. You should sign up for it! It’s like CWW but for a whole month. And only for girls. @esther-c and I should be doing it.

@esther-c

“I am, I’m just trying to be mature about it.” He gave her a playful wink and squeezed her hand.

Maybe if she studied his face long enough she’d find something to not like.

“Says the kid who gave every girl in his fourth grade class a valentine.”

LOL I love these parts. 💛💛

Also I have two questions… don’t listen to me if you don’t…[Read more]

@rae

*sob*

There’s a small kingdom settled on the jagged crown of a snow covered mountain—a kingdom named Modorid by the people who founded it some thousand years ago. It was the only settlement for miles and miles, and most have forgotten it’s there. It is inhabited by the Modoish—jovial people with hair as white as the snow that filled their c…

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@esther-c

“Sí. Should we meet in the library?”

“Yeah, that’s perfect. Thank you.” She smiled.

*gasp* It’s a date!

“Or the time when—”

When what, Tyler? 👀 I want to know…

@esther-c

So you do Communion every week?

Indeed.

Haha, I guess it just comes down to tradition then! XD

Beliefs about alcohol are probably involved too. We don’t see anything wrong with drinking, (in moderation; don’t get drunk obviously), but I know a lot of traditions believe differently.

@esther-c

I hope you can!! I would love to see you there!

@theducktator

Aw, okay! Hopefully you can still make it!

@esther-c

Girl, I’m actually so scared that I’m gonna have to have surgery one day for some reason or another. 😭 It’s probably inevitable, but I just hate the idea of being dead asleep while being operated on. 😵‍💫 (Not that I’d LIKE to be awake… XDXD)

I don’t know, it would be such a dramatic experience… I bet you would feel one part stress, o…[Read more]

@esther-c

No pain! It’s more important that we gauge the problems by scans, rather than by ‘I feel like something is wrong,’ because he is numb from the lower spine downward. There is more concern that he won’t feel something until it’s gotten too bad to reverse.

I know this sounds really bad, but he’s doing fine. ;] Even if he was to have…[Read more]

@esther-c

Hehe. *doesn’t even know how many snowballs I have*

@theducktator @stephie @ellette-giselle @liberty (How is your KP fanfic coming along? Have you worked on it? I eagerly await the next section) @highscribeofaetherium @whalekeeper @power @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @raxforge @rae @jonas @loopylin @esther-c @linus-smallprint

10 snowballs at each of you! That’s 500 words, and I expect to be s…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings (Hi! How are you? Haven’t seen you in forever!) @theducktator @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @whalekeeper @esther-c @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @ellette-giselle @loopylin @highscribeofaetherium @theshadow @liberty @freed_and_redeemed @kyronthearcanin @trailblazer @acancello @anyone-else-i-forgot

Hear ye, hear ye! God willing, t…[Read more]

@esther-c

I’m so sorry, I forgot about this!!!!

I think it’s a new day, so where do you want to continue? XD

@esther-c

are you looking for critiques? Or just posting for fun?

I just wanted to make sure…I don’t want to assume you want critiques if you’re just wanting to share it with us! 🙃

@esther-c

That’s so funny…My sister Hallie’s nickname is Hal…we call her that all the time XDXD

When she was little we used to call her HalPal…we don’t really use that anymore but I laugh remembering that, it was pretty cute hahaha

@esther-c

Within the next hour, everyone rushed around the house, trying to get ready for church and still be able to leave on time. This included a couple pairs of shoes being thrown down the stairs, someone looking for their shoes, people telling whoever was getting ready in the bathroom to hurry up, and a sister frantically searching her…

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@hybridlore @esther-c @theducktator

Thanks y’all!!

@whalekeeper @loopylin

Praying 🙏

@esther-c

It looks a lot better! One thing I noticed is that Antonio does say “fabuloso” twice.

“Then the topic conveniently comes up in a conversation with Easton.”

Also, I feel like this might be better if you just change it to “Then I can ask Easton” or something like that. Otherwise, it looks great! I like the way you made Hallie more rea…[Read more]

@esther-c

girllll

i love thissss

Keep writing ✨✨